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Reviews for Out of time

By : minniemay
  • From theskyatdawn2 on February 25, 2018

    Wish u would have finished. Well structured tale and good development. You have a penchant and talent for weaving a great build on story. Thank you I enjoyed my time.


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  • From LyeLye on April 15, 2008
    I dont really like this story at all to tell you the truth, and when you describe the encounters with lexi and sarah's old friends its like your just mirroring how sarah found them all word for word. Its very annoying!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 29, 2008
    WOW Matey that was some interesting story. hmm and im very curious about what Lithan is up too. Also what happened to her father Dominic ??? I Really Hope you update soon and spread some light on lithan's plan.

    Cheers
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  • From Emeraldfires on September 06, 2007
    It so good to see you continue this story. It had been so long since the last post, I had to reread the story. I still love it! Please continue again soon!
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  • From ANON - Emeraldfire on December 11, 2006
    I love this story! Please keep writing! The twins were a very nice twist!
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  • From ANON - KriKriBird on December 03, 2006
    HOOOK!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - vixen on November 16, 2006
    its the line: poppies that make you fall asleep. that is from the wizard of oz.
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  • From ANON - Supermanga on October 28, 2006
    I love this story, hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ox King on October 05, 2006
    Hey there, I'm enjoying your story. Thanks for taking the time to write for us readers.
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  • From ANON - my on September 18, 2006
    You and your cliffhangers!!!
    I love the story so far. I forgot how amazing your writing is. I was hesitent at first since as you know I usually don't read het fics, but OMG the first chapter I was hooked. You better get more out soon or I will make you watch Dir en grey over and over (not that it isn't a bad thing)!!!!
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  • From ANON - kookookitty on September 15, 2006
    i don't usually read it if someone other than sarah goes into the labyrinth as most are thinly concealed mary sue's. this story however is different; the mythology and legend, you have obviously researched. i like the personality of lexy, not a sarah clone but there is some of sarah in your portrayal of her and much more. i like that you have written the female characters as strong and intelligent, self assured and independent.

    this is a captivating story that is eloquently written. i am looking forward to reading more of this engaging piece.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From Piratekris on September 13, 2006
    another one please!! I like how strong she is!
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  • From ANON - krista on September 13, 2006
    woot! way to go am! keep posting and sure enough maybe you'll finish this one!
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  • From ANON - Maggie on September 11, 2006
    you totally have to keep up with its good. I await the next chaper with baited breath.
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  • From ANON - Draco on September 09, 2006
    I like this story, but just to let you know Sarah is with a H at end not Sara. Other then that keep up the good work
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