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Reviews for The Mother Lode

By : abraxis
  • From Goblingirlsarah on January 13, 2024

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  • From Goblingirlsarah on January 12, 2024

     I'm laughing, I'm crying, I'm screaming in my mind and kicking my feet. This story is awesome!


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  • From theskyatdawn2 on October 03, 2018

    Thank you for an outstanding reads. You are very good at development.


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  • From DarkjX39 on June 09, 2014
    Very wonderful story. I must admit I had some trouble in the beginning with some of the changing viewpoints and a "jumpy" style, but it either got better or I got used to it for the sake of continuing. I am very pleased with how this turned out... it was very believable and well put together. Bravo!

    ~Dark
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  • From ANON - nena on March 30, 2010
    This has to be an amazing story beginning to end. Plenty of suspense, intrigue, action and more action. Very well thought out and executed. Though I would have liked to have known more of Jenna before the meeting, just to see the little evolution she had just by building the ships, it's an interesting take on characters and their evolution.
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  • From crazychi on March 17, 2010
    All I can say is "Well done." What a fantastic story for Riddick. This one didn't disappoint at all. I really enjoyed reading it.
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  • From ANON - Reinsultrul on April 27, 2007
    This story rocked! feral intoxication adrenaline high. You definitely have a talent abraxis. Please continue the excellent writing, it's addicting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 22, 2007
    This is the first Pitch Black fic I have read and I really liked it. You did a great job
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  • From ANON - Siva Dawn on October 18, 2006
    I came across 'Mother Lode'yesterday, and by the second chapter, I knew I would be neglecting everything else until I finished reading it. By the fifth chapter, I knew that this was a story I would print out and bind into a book. (Since I discovered fan fiction some years ago, I took up the art of bookbinding so I could take my favorite stories with me.)

    Abraxis, your take on Riddick's personality is perfect, and your original characters are interesting as well. The pace and the continuing mystery are captivating, keeping the reader drawn into the acton.Excellent work! I look forward to seeing more of your stories.
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  • From ANON - sunshyne on October 02, 2006
    This was the BEST story of the 'Pitch Black' movie I have ever read. Thank you so much for writing it. I hope to find more of your writing on aff.
    Suny
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  • From ANON - elizabeth on September 07, 2006
    dear abraxis;
    i have just finished reading your story "motherload" and i wanted to tell you that i absolutely loved it! i am a huge vin diesel fan as well as a collector of his movies, i can actually see this as a continuation of the chronicles. i think you captured the essence of riddick so well in this story it is almost scary. your original characters are also extreamly well developed, and the plot line is as wonderful as a rollercoster. the changes in the point of view are timed incredibly well also.

    sincerly yours
    elizabeth
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  • From ANON - Angie on August 16, 2006
    Great job!

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  • From ANON - beth on August 10, 2006
    Complex and intricate, this complex story held my attention and left me wanting to read more of your work. You gave the characters life, depth, and subtlety. Although your Snape-like doctor did make me grin on first description.

    Overall, I forgot this was FAN fic and just read it like a novel.

    Not an average response for me.

    Thank you, and do post more somewhere?
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  • From ANON - Tasha on August 06, 2006
    I Love this story - i have done nothing all day as i couldnt stop reading your story, this is probly one of the best riddick stories i have read, and even better was that it was all done in one go, no 1 to 2week delays between chapters, lol i cnt get over how good this story was (mmmmm riddick) and im sooo jealous of Jenna who is a wicked heroine. Excellent excellent work!
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  • From ANON - Shadow on August 03, 2006
    Absolutely love this story! Riddick has always been one of my favorite characters of all time. Awesome story set in that universe. I can tell lots of time went into making this something very book worthy. I look forward to further writings from you in the future!
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