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Reviews for First Among Commanders

By : hellsraven
  • From ANON - Kyradda on September 05, 2012
    This is awesome. I love a little Vakko/Riddick and this story shows great promise... Will you be finishing it?
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  • From myladymystere on May 30, 2009
    love a Riddick and Vaako pairing. Sorry there wasn't more
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  • From Aresy on June 30, 2007
    ^_^ I like how u picked up right after the end of the movie. This already sounds good, please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - Toki Mirage on September 10, 2006
    this is a cool idea! update damnit! *pouts* Such a teaser... didn't even get to see a kiss... *sniffles* are you ever planning on updating? if you do, email me please!! ^^
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  • From ANON - wishdragon on September 07, 2006
    love the story cann't wait for more chapters. you have done a great job on writing this story it holds you interest and you cann't wait to see were they going. thanks
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  • From ANON - wishdragon on August 19, 2006
    readed your story i like it but this chapter was a little short. are you going to write more soon. i love R and V stories so i hope to read more of this one soon. wishdragon
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  • From ANON - RJ on August 04, 2006
    Hey not bad so far. Love to read more. Love R/V stories so few out there. Please update soon! Keep up the hard work. Peace! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2006
    I don't usually review for adultfanfiction, but this pair lacks in fics and I want to see this continue so please do
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