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By : JulieL
  • From himeko on August 26, 2019

    Phenomenal job hope to see this updated soon!


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  • From ANON - Skeptic on July 26, 2012
    Well apparently you didn't try hard enough... LOL It's been much more than a year between updates. Is this story dead? Cuz it'd be nice to know if it is, it'll save us readers from pining after something that'll never come our way. So is it?
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  • From jectex57 on December 03, 2011
    Oh no no no... you can't leave it there?!? *whineing* Please, please update soon. Please put me on your list for updates.
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  • From mareepoole on June 19, 2009
    when is chapter 11 coming?
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  • From mareepoole on May 07, 2009
    update now
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  • From ANON - predator808 on March 25, 2009
    plz update soon begs u plz love this story
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  • From ANON - predator808 on March 22, 2009
    plz update soon plz
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  • From Vyper on October 16, 2008
    She is going through hell............I mean hell........what a frickin bastard. Even those who were supposed to be nice like humans are acting like animals. What jerks guys can be.........bastards.......anyway keep writing.
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  • From shaypiratess on August 23, 2008
    Okay, this story is by far the best I have come across. It is angsty, realistic, and flows very nicely. Sadly, it is not at its full potential due to the horrendous grammar . . . yes, the grammar is very appalling. But it certainly isn't the worst---there is worse, believe me!

    How many betas do you have, anyway? I think it's time to either fire the ones you have (since the grammar is still lacking miserably), or just add some more who actually know what the hell they are doing. ^_~

    Poor Tina, she has it bad, doesn't she? I am certainly looking forward to when Cro'vin's and Eal'cra's heads are sitting on a silver platter for her to admire. And I do hope she is the one who delivers the well deserved death blow. Hell, do away with Chris and Sonny while you are at it. I liked Sonny up until the point he raped her, too. He is no better than the bastard she calls 'my master.'

    Please update soon as I am spinning circles in my seat over what will happen next. I am enthusiastically checking in on your wonderful story on a regular basis, so don't keep me waiting too long, okay? Thanks for a great read, and don't forget to brush up on that grammar!

    ¢¾ Shay Piratess
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  • From sagikamikazi on March 06, 2008
    Yes , it was worth the wait, but now I'm horribly afraid for Tina!OMG she can't possibly go through this crap again!
    Good job Shorty, don't keep us waiting too long ok?
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on March 05, 2008
    WOOT!! An update. That was awesome. Tina has a friend/ally - aww, how cute! But, he's sick - aww, how sad. I hope it's nothing too too bad. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work girlie!! =)
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  • From MuseofScrolls on March 04, 2008
    Wow, Shorty, just wow. I didn't think I would see So'ghan so "humbled" enough to request assistance for Tina. And I get why Re'san doesn't look too favorably upon the Grand Elder along with Ceta. And now at least she has someone there to help protect her...just wondering for how long. As both he and the Healer tell her, it's not likely to stop Cro'vin from being the evil bastard he is.

    I'm just so very happy to see an update from you, and so proud, too! ^w^ Serious kudos to you, Shorty, and I hope you're able to update soon. Looking forward to more.
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  • From AllSpark on March 04, 2008
    Really good fic, I'm glad that you decided to continue.
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  • From DasGrauen on March 03, 2008
    That's a bit weird to me. I just thought this weekend of this Story and as I checked today for Updates I see that you have added a new chapter
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  • From sagikamikazi on January 17, 2008
    There will be more chapters right?She will get to have some pleasurable Elder fun right?! PLEASE?!!!!Desperatly hoping you get inspired to do more. This was great!!!!!
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