Click Here!

Reviews for The Last Temptation

By : CuxW
  • From DanielDelano on March 10, 2017

    Words fail me. This is without exception the best thing I have ever read. And I have read the best. From Charles Dickens to Thomas Harris. This is the best. I hope you continue to write. I look forward to readying whatever you might wright next :)


    Report Review

  • From ANON - sayomi-chan on August 04, 2010
    This is a fabulously complex story and I'm disappointed to note that it hasn't been updated in over a year. Granted, I never even thought about a Hannibal/Will pairing before today, but curiosity brought me to this story and the wonderful way you've crafted this plot has kept me captivated. Lecter is such a complex character to write for and yet you've done an incredible job of keeping him both in character and writing such a pairing for him, making it very plausible to boot! I don't think I'll be able to watch any of the movies or read the books now without cheering for a little slash! The story itself is so intricate, characters developing and actions winding together in such a way that I can't help but feel you had something truly breath-taking in mind for a conclusion. I also love how nurturing Hannibal is to Will, comforting and frighteningly protective in a way that only Lecter can pull off. The episode with Willy was also so tragic, and certainly nothing good from Clarice and Molly in such close proximity to each other. It's a fascinating story that you have going here, and I can only pray that you haven't left it behind permanently, but perhaps on the back burner. Anyway, wonderful job on this story so far as you truly have a gift for writing! ~raises a glass~ Here's to hoping there are more excellent chapters like the ones that compose this story to come in the future!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on February 10, 2010
    Oh wow, this is just brilliant, the characterisations, the pace, the writing style and not to forget the superb plot! Please please continue this and if at all possible don't let Will be fatally skewered by Clarice, he is too good a character to be snuffed out in such a way.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Teh Ellen on July 27, 2009
    So....after all that work I put in to making those CDs, why hasn't this been updated in more than a year?
    Report Review

  • From nekogirl1 on October 13, 2008
    Wow, I had to read this all in 1 day! Wonderful plot & charactarization. Can't wait for chap 9
    Report Review

  • From Vex on May 07, 2008
    Of course when I saw that you had posted a new chapter I had to reread them all..
    So here I am at 3am and loving chapter 8. So the women have started their dance, I wish the men luck.
    I do love how messed up Hannibal and Will are. All their oddness matches.
    Report Review

  • From megara1 on April 19, 2008
    great story so far. my computer had to be reinstalled so i lost everything. I can't wait for the next update.
    Report Review

  • From Mino on April 15, 2008
    Boy was I excited when I saw this story was updated, my
    computer is finaly fixed so I didn't have to print this
    chapter to read it. What a chapter it was, I still can't
    believe Will and Hannibal got caught, it surprised me,
    he's usually so perceptive. I really liked the dream
    Will had too, it was neat, and was a interesting way
    to show what Will was feeling. Moll sure didn't take it
    well when she found out, kinda like she was in denial or
    something. I sure hope her and Clarece(?) don't cause too
    much trouble for Will and Hannibal, they deserve a little
    peace. Anyway keep up the good work and please update soon
    *throws you magic cookie*
    Report Review

  • From darkangel985 on April 14, 2008
    Yes, you updated. *does happy dance*
    I loved this chapter just as much as the ones before. Especially the dream and the following confrontation with Molly. And the idea to have Molly and Clarice meet up is wonderful and really original.
    But what I loved the most was Hannibal's comment, that he didn't want a bird if he could have an angel. That was so unbelievably beautiful.
    I'm in love with this story, I absolutely am and I can't say that often enough.
    Report Review

  • From Vex on March 20, 2008
    Wow. The Last Temptation is the first Han/Will fiction I've read and I couldn't be happier.
    I'm a big fan of your Hannibal and hope that the rest of your chapters are just as good.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Mino on January 24, 2008
    Omg, yay, I was so happy to see an update.
    my internet has been down so I ended up printing off the chapter,
    I read it a few times, it was great.
    keep up the great work *throws you magic cookie*
    Report Review

  • From megara1 on January 18, 2008
    hey, love the story but sickle cell anemia is found in african americans only. willy is white.
    Report Review

  • From darkangel985 on January 13, 2008
    Yes, a new chapter and after reading it I can honestly say, that it was worth every second of the time I waited for it. Fabulous and definitely the best one yet. I can't even begin telling you all the thing I like about it, but a few things were simply outstanding:
    1. I loved your Willy. I haven't read the books, so the altered relationship was new to me. But it fit your story perfectly. He's so insightful and the way he handles Hannibal, his maturity, is really wonderful. Plus his death was really "nice", a little sad, but also really fitting.
    2. Hannibal drawing a castle for Will. That image made me smile, cause it's somewhat like the doctor to do such a thing. Plus the scene in the artshop was funny.
    and 3. Their flirt in the bar. Just wonderful dialoge.

    So, those were the bits I loved most. Now I'll patiently wait for the next chapter and cross my fingers that it will be just as good.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SilentOmega on December 28, 2007
    OOh you must make more chapters! this is brillent! I love how you have brought out the emotion's in them both!
    Report Review

  • From IamM on November 14, 2007
    I am loving this story. It's so well written and the song lyrics are an added bonus. Please update whenever you find the time.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!