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Reviews for River Rapids

By : jemstone5
  • From beliefinkakashi on November 01, 2011
    Awesome!!! I knew I read one of your stories before, and this one confirmed it! I've read the third one of the series...

    Have you ever considered writing for a publisher?
    Love it! Want to read more!
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  • From littlemissy1503 on January 30, 2007
    This story can't be finished, there is still the happ birth and fixing Ralph's heart.
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  • From littlemissy1503 on January 17, 2007
    reread this story and I still love it. please update son.
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  • From ANON - Stewie on November 26, 2006
    First off let me say how much I love this story. Part one and two were great and nicely written... then I got to chapter 13 (sigh)
    El is a hypocrite...
    She left earth to avoid life and consequences if I'm correct (police chasing her) So how can she look down at the two females?
    I don't mean to sound cynical because once again the characters are great, but it just seams out of character for her to suddenly try to judge someone. Like her status suddenly went to her head. Just my thoughts as a reader, please dont take it personally. I hope later she will apologize for acting the way she did.
    Stew

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  • From ANON - Muse of Scrolls on October 22, 2006
    You must continue, please! I (and I'm sure others) are EAGERLY awaiting the next chapter! The first book was amazing, so I have no doubt that this one will continue to be amazing, too. Seeing El interacting more with M'Pa and Ver'On going to get Ralph and Ro provides a nice balance of events.

    Also, it would seem that there's more females to be brought on this trip instead of the original two for Tan and Kal (though I'm more curious about what Kal's been up to). Please continue as soon as you're able. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Narranasa on October 21, 2006
    More more.. :)
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  • From Retribution on October 17, 2006
    please tell me there is more to this story
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  • From jemstone5 on October 12, 2006
    NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR

    pacients everyone, the first chapter of the third installment is still in hand writing right now. i'm typing it in whenever i can at the office. you'll have all the answers to all your questions in that story.

    also, maybe at the end, a sneek peak at a possible 4th story You never know with me :D

    hang in there, i'm almost done.

    jem

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  • From saifai on October 11, 2006
    I've really been enjoying the stories. The characters and plots have always been so intriguing to me. Sometimes your spelling isn't quite right, but you've improved so much with the second book compared with the first one. I can't wait to read the whole story to see where you take the characters.
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on October 08, 2006
    Oh no your not finished. You have to many questions to answer.

    What will happen with Chonie and Tan'ock?
    What is happening with Kal and this ritual?
    What is going to happen to the two other humans they picked up?
    Where are the babies? WE WANT BABIES! WE WANT BABIES!
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on October 04, 2006
    Hey! When's El going to have her bundles of Human/Yautja cuteness. I just know you've got another brilliant story in mind and I can't wait.
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on October 04, 2006
    I just had this feeling last night that you would update soon. I thought it would have been this morning though. After the day I've had, I'm glad I didn't get this gem until after work. It gave me a nice chance to relax.

    Hmmmm, offering ceremony. What could Kal be cooking up now?
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on October 04, 2006
    All I have to say is...You had better not end it here! This story line is way too damned good to just let it die here. Waiting anxiously... :)
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  • From ANON - scars lady13 on October 04, 2006
    please don't let this be the end of this story i need to know more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lorna on October 02, 2006
    Please post I will be waiting.
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