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Reviews for Succumb

By : Pagan
  • From ANON - Claire on June 08, 2005
    Woah. That was really good! The Epilouge was a tad bit off, in some areas now that we know what happens in RotS. But all in all, it was perfect. Great job!
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  • From Kichi on June 06, 2005
    I like the thought of Anikan sending her dirty thoughts with his powers! hehe, I love this fic, and I like your Ani.
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  • From ANON - J.R or G.r (Reloaded on June 06, 2005
    Shit.

    That was fucking sweet!
    Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - bulma90_13 on June 05, 2005
    this is a great fic. it really follows the storyline well and the fact that you used quotations from the movie really help to make it seem real. i cant wait to read the sequel.
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  • From ANON - killslay on June 05, 2005
    This is a fascinating story that explains Padme's transformation from a strong former queen to a helpless wife. I remember my dad complaining about how weak Padme's character was in Ep III: being even unable to decide what to do about her pregnancy, the deterioration of the Senate, etc; and this really casts some light on how Anakin was able to manipulate her into becoming his. It's a very powerful story. I would have liked to have seen more of her views on the events in Ep III, but I suppose her transformation into Anakin's wife was the main focus of the story. I can't wait for the sequal!
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  • From ANON - Carole on May 29, 2005
    Wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Luna on May 26, 2005
    this is a really, really awesome fic... woah. As a general rule, I don't like Padme, but the tittle of this story enticed me... and I found only awesome writing, interesting plot, and fairly accurately portraid characters... :)

    Overall, I really only have one word to describe this fic: Orgasmic :)

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  • From ANON - know-it-all on May 17, 2005
    This fic is so awesome! I have no idea why you don't have a million reviews, but you'll get there. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Katie Sparks on April 26, 2005
    Very well done, I am impressed,very..erm aggressive, some syntax errors though, but i think those were done by computer because they all looked the same, btu a wonderful story none the less!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 18, 2005
    you are an incredibly talented writer, you capture the emotions with immense precision... congratulations on an excellent story
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  • From ANON - Elise on April 07, 2005
    AWESOME!!! What more can I say?! What an incredible addition to Episode 2 and transition to Episode 3! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - inkphenda on March 11, 2005
    Oh, very well done! The detail, scene, and interaction you painted was just stunning, mixing the movie and the original material to perfection. Great job!
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  • From ANON - amniarix on September 05, 2004
    Wow, intellectually I always knew Anakin had to get from the sweet slave boy to the heartless creature of darkness he became, and the obsee joe journey this would entail is exquisitely detailed in your fic.x wix with properly and clearly defined motivations and thought processes will always do it for me and this is a prime example of it. Can't give you enough praise for the seamless combining of smut fic and raw emotion to create this mini masterpiece. Love your work, thank you for sharing this amazing vision.
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  • From ANON - amniarix on September 05, 2004
    you wrote this fic for me didn't you, because it is so bloody good and exactly what I have always wished someone with talent and imagination would write. Chapters three and four were splendid and do you think its too late to get George to do a reshoot and include some of your scenes?
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  • From ANON - amniarix on September 05, 2004
    Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, that explains WHY Padme covered the security camera in her room, In the movie I just accept it when Anakin tells Obi-Wan it is covered but this is too good, it ties in with the movie so well. Love this story already and I've only reached chapter 2.
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