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Reviews for Pieces

By : KNaranak
  • From Vika on May 11, 2008
    This is very good. Cant wait for the rest :)
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  • From insane8veggies on January 30, 2007
    good story!
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  • From darqstar on February 02, 2006
    Sorry, but again you've got too long a row of ***** so I have to side scroll.
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  • From ANON - Firefly Lover on February 02, 2006
    Ah, sorry about that but I will have a few new chapters tonight for you all. Rememebr that Otis is older than Baby (Firefly). He is an adult looking back on his life. The "Baby" he has met as a child was another castoff child living out in the sticks, roughly the same age as him. He has yet to name Vera, Baby. Also notice that Baby (Firefly) had just been kicked out of school (whch the TDR bio says happened when she was 7) and he is a young adult, this is Otis's first meeting with the family. Hang in there and you'll see why he names Baby after is lost childhood friend. Darqstar, you're always thinking...keep it up...makes me think too!:)
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  • From darqstar on February 01, 2006
    I hope you plan on posting more tonight, you left us with a hell of a cliffhanger.

    I'm also curious why Baby told him she didn't have a name. In the last chapter, they refered to her as Vera, which was her given name.
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  • From ANON - Firefly Lover on January 31, 2006
    *grins* Now what a clever woman. Yes, it is Otis flashing in and out. I've had sepsis before and believe me you don't know if you're coming, going, or been! The blog on the Devil's Rejects site only says that Otis came home with Spaulding to live with the Fireflys, it never pointed out in what way...only that he bonded immediately with Baby. So I saw this gap as a problem and I am always looking for more Firefly mystery to explain! Keep up the reviews and let me know if you think of anything! Thank you so much!
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  • From darqstar on January 31, 2006
    Ah hah! I think I've figured it out. You're changing the past. (I don't mind, I'm one of those fanfic writers that believe canon was made to be messed with and fanfic writers are the ones to do it!) Excellent job, I like the way Otis keeps flashing in and out of past and present. Keep it up, but you know, get some sleep too when you need it. It would suck to find out you died of fanfiction. *wink*
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  • From KNaranak on January 31, 2006
    Thank you, Darqstar, again. You're an angel.
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  • From ANON - darqstar on January 31, 2006
    The first chapter is great, but I can't read the second chapter because again, you've got too many *****. That messes up the formatting, so people have to scroll sideways to read each line.
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