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Reviews for Rivers Run Deep

By : jemstone5
  • From beliefinkakashi on October 30, 2011
    OMG!!!!! That has got to be one of the best stories I've ever read!!!!!!!
    You blew my mind! I hated having to go to sleep and getting up to go to work.... they just got in the way. I was so upset that it's over... *tear*

    Keep up the great work!!!!! Hope to read more of your work!
    LOVED IT!!!!

    Kind of miss Sol, and Vex agreeing with that bitch was surprising...

    So glad M'Pa stayed alive... woot!!! he's the second mate... woot! They better not take on a second female...
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  • From maqeurious on October 31, 2010
    Wow, just wow! You realize I spent the last 6 hours reading every word, every Chapter of this awesome story! It was.... just WOW! Is there a second part? Again... wow! Just WOW! lmao
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  • From alleykitten on April 12, 2009
    hi!
    first off,i have to say, great story... it's pulled me in and i practially read it all in one sitting... bar getting up to grab food and feeding my daughter...^__^ very riveting! can't wait to go read the sequels!!!
    tho i have to say, and please don't take this the wrong way, but, it's Bo staff, Katana, Sai and Thigh... sorry... it's just i kept reading them, and as i'm a raelly big fan of asian culture and weapons plus being a beta-reader, those four really stood out to me >
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  • From ANON - Muse of Scrolls on October 21, 2006
    I have just one word for you...WOW. That was such an INCREDIBLE story! So much development went into it, characters, plots, everything! I must say I was a bit overwhelmed when I saw how long your story was. But after I started it, I just had to finish it. And you must continue with another book, you absolutely MUST. I simply adore El, Ver'On, M'pa, and many other characters. You have a real flare for storytelling. It was an honor to read your story, and thank you for giving me and others that honor.

    I hope to read more soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - raizer on June 13, 2006
    loved it! awesome, awesome story! I hope more is coming!
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  • From prairiefire on June 13, 2006
    Ouch. That was a nasty punishment. Serves her right though, stupidity shouldn't be bred anyway.

    I love this story. It's just indescribable. I eagerly await the next story. I wanna find out what happens on Earth. You know M'Pa's going to have his butt kicked to within an inch of his life.
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  • From ANON - Lorna on January 11, 2006
    Hurry up and get it fixed okay you can't stop now
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  • From ANON - Crying_Angel_yue on January 05, 2006
    i loved the storyand sorry about the problems with you computer, i have been writing a fanfiction of my own but havn't been able to update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2005
    uhh, intresting chapter. A little off the story perhaps.... none the less a good story
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  • From ANON - Chancelor22 on December 30, 2005
    I truly enjoy this story. Thank you very much for sharing. I liked the CSI bit. I am a fan of that as well. I also liked the pun at the end. But, I did notice that you misspelled "musk". At least that is what I think you meant?! Males in heat and all that. But, newayz, keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Lorna on December 30, 2005
    I am sorry.I am the worst at reading my email. But it is alright with me.I Love the story.
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  • From ANON - circle of addictions on December 24, 2005
    wow, have you ever read a story when you felt completely embarassed for the character? Well i almost wanted to stop reading!. I felt so bad for El! I can't wait to see what happens. He can't be mad at her.
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  • From ANON - bellemorte on December 24, 2005
    Another good chapter!
    Ver'On better not hit El, that would make me very angry at him!
    Keep the updates coming, I love that you are so fast at getting them up here!
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  • From ANON - circle of addictions on December 23, 2005
    Talk about a cliff hanger! Please update soon!!!!
    Oh they have to accept her after that speach!
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  • From ANON - bellemorte on December 23, 2005
    Yeah!! Another awesome chapter!
    I loved El's speech. Can't wait to see if Ver'On gets to keep her!
    Keep the updates coming!!
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