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Reviews for AvP: Desiderata

By : Subtext
  • From memellowchick on December 10, 2009
    WOW WHAT A GREAT STORY!!! I really hope you continue it! It will be sooo sad to see another great fic die :(
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  • From ANON - Caz on December 23, 2005
    i hope you're going to continue this, it's been fun so far.
    i would have shot the bugger too. lol.
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  • From ANON - demonlordlover on December 09, 2005
    Great fic. I remember reading the book and hating how it seemed to leave things up in the air when it ended. I think you're doing a better job than the authors. (Sorry Perry!!)
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  • From ANON - Hanako on November 26, 2005
    I quite like this- I hope you'll update soon...
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  • From ANON - dragon85 on November 18, 2005
    More please!! MORE!!
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  • From ANON - Demo on November 17, 2005
    FANTASTIC STORY!!

    Characters, detail and flow amazing. Really like the slower pacing, I don’t mean I think the story is dragging, far from it, it’s GREAT, just that you’re not rushing into the Xeno scene, you’re building up from the bond they share. This makes me look forward to it more… Please continue! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Kelpie on November 17, 2005
    More, please, pretty please with the sugar on top? :-)
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  • From ANON - dragon85 on November 12, 2005
    Keep it up!! Some action please!!
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  • From AntiDolorifico on November 11, 2005
    More! Now! =D Keep up the splendid work, it's an excellent story.
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  • From ANON - pallas on November 10, 2005
    This was simply wow. The characterisation, the plot developmensts... Bravo! I'm totally hooked up and I hope there will be more soon!
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  • From ANON - nadine drylie on November 10, 2005
    What can I say....WoW! I love it! I love predator fiction,unfortunately there is not alot to be found. I so hope that you continue the story and that yes...um...uh.."mating" will be involved. So sue me,I'm a sucker for interspecies relationships. I think the plot so far is very action oriented and very visually descriptive. Done very well. I love it when reading a story you have enough description to visualize yourself in the situation that is occuring. Please feed my addiction and update soon. keep up the great work!
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  • From karmaxp on November 09, 2005
    ME again i didnot mean to put my story on top. I had a typo and I think its stupid that if you change a word you go to the top. GReat story and sorry SMiles
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  • From karmaxp on November 09, 2005
    Woah most people call paragraphs chapters, you have CHAPTERS .GOOD CHAPTERS!! I have not read the alien verses predator book Prey but you make me want to. If you keep going i'll keep reading and giving feed back GReat work Lorna
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  • From AntiDolorifico on November 09, 2005
    Great chapters, the language you use is very pleasant to read, I really like your writing style. Update soon, cliffhangers make me go crazy... =D
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