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Reviews for Forbidden

By : Raythe
  • From Katsunie on February 21, 2017

    I have loved this story since i found it on another site. I find it to have a great if a little intense plot  at times. I would love to know what happens next. I hope even thought you have all of the other stories that you are currently busy with that there will be time in the future to see what will happen next with Forbidden. As this is one story that has such a great plot and could unfold in any number of ways that it literally has one hanging on the edge of their seat waiting patiently to see were the story will go next.

    Please continue when you have the time Ray!!!

     


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  • From ANON - alyss on January 06, 2016
    i love this story and i've been to your site and love those stories but could you finish this one,n please
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  • From ANON - Eiriankageno on October 05, 2015
    I read this story a number of years ago and recently reread it. It's intriguing plot wise ,hot and a great read. It's too bad you've abandoned it. I know you write original fiction these days, I'm actually a member of your site, but I still hope you'll come back to this someday.
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  • From ANON - bad_beetle on April 14, 2014
    hello hello darling! I recently stumbled upon your fan fiction and wanted to tell you that I am enjoying so far! I'm on chapter 10 at the moment and simply adore the development. very excited to read more! I am a Luke/Vader fan so it's often hard to find good reads so thank you for posting.
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  • From malchance on January 29, 2014
    I have never read a story with this pairing before but, I have to say I am now hooked. I absolutely love Forbidden. I hope you plan to return to this story some day. I would love to read more.
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  • From ANON - Edyth Chamblee on March 24, 2013
    Forbidden is facinating so far, a ver good read I give 5 out of 5 .
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  • From ANON - A creeper on December 17, 2012
    Do you know that despite my deep and abiding love for this story I never connected you with RaytheReign? Fail.
    I love this story, it's both creepy in its obsessive dark qualities and gorgeous by virtue of your word choice and character development. I'm with you in the cancer boat, and I know what it does to a person. I'm so glad to see you kicking ass and writing again.
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  • From ANON - Keith on November 06, 2012
    I think you should send Forbidden to Disney, so they can use the scenario for Star Wars VII
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  • From ANON - CDM on March 10, 2012
    *speechless* ...
    I love you.
    I mean, I love the stuff you write, so please, continue !

    It seems you haven't updated Forbidden for quite a while (or if you have somewhere, please tell me ! I went from fanfiction.net to squidge.org, then here, and I don't see Forbidden in RaytheReign but maybe the story is still somewhere else ?? *big starry eyes full of hope*), but please take pity on the poor desperate soul begging on her knees to have more of Vader x Luke...

    I'm aching to know more about the story, and to have more of smut of course.
    Since I've read Guardian Devil I have had very hard time finding a fanfiction who could compare with yours you know... A fic with such a captivating and intriguing story, and with so erotic stuff too. Then I read Forbidden and I must admit that didn't disappoint me (which is an euphemism for "I couldn't think of anything else for the whole week and could hardly take my eyes off the screen"). I really wish you don't drop that piece !

    Anyway, I've seen a bit of your site RaytheReign, and it looks well like heaven to me (erotic and fantasy and dark and yaoi and written by you ? all my dreams come true !), so I'll probably join (very) soon ^^

    Thanks a lot for this, alas incomplete, but so great in every chapter, every line, every word story !!

    CDM.
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  • From ANON - B on January 18, 2012
    I really love this story. I've been checking on it for updates, but since there hasn't been any, I'm asking you to please not give up on this story. I would love to read another chapter.
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  • From silencedogood on June 17, 2011
    ahh! please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - >:3 on May 30, 2011
    I love this series!!! I love the characters depths!!! But I really love Vader's personality...being a Vader fangirl myself XD. Ah! Cant wait till the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Answers on May 21, 2011
    When oh when will you update? I love this story so much and haven't read it for years but i just got this craving last night and re-read the whole thing! God its so good, i love Luke so much in this, (hate Qui-Gon though, man stealer). I'll join your website and pay and everything if only you'd update this story! sobs please, we loved you first *pouts*
    pleaseeeeeee
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  • From ANON - Nicole on May 06, 2011
    Hello! I don't know if I've ever reviewed this fiction or not before. I found it a while ago, and loved it, and then my computer had to be wiped, and I got a new one, and I lost all my saved stories/favorites. I just found this one again about two weeks ago and have been reading every night.

    I absolutely adore this fic! There are very few Star Wars fics out there that catch my attention, and that I adore, but I really love this one. The way the characters mesh, and even with such strong powers, they're still so human and imperfect and insecure. And the tension between Qui-Gon, Luke, and Vader is awesomely portrayed.

    I was wondering...do you have the rest of this fic posted elsewhere? Am I just missing it? I was really, really hoping to see it was completed, and I saw that you had battled for a long while with cancer (and I truly hope this review finds you healthy and happy), so I wasn't sure if it was ever finished and posted, or if it's been abandoned.

    Anyhow, I just wanted to see if you had this story in its entirety elsewhere (or plans to finish it in the future), and to leave a review, because I truly do adore this fiction. I've had some very, very late nights thanks to Forbidden. Lol!

    Thanks again, and take care! Happy writing (and good luck with your Original Fiction works, too!)
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  • From LadyLaran on December 12, 2010
    Hmmm..another trap? *pokes* More please when you can!
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