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Reviews for Kagome's Paths

By : kagehoshi
  • From LADYWELLES on September 22, 2007
    please keep it going its good update soon TTFN
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  • From Luciana on August 19, 2007
    Konnichiwa DarkStar-san! Did I get the translation right? Well I really like what your story, although I hope Inu-chan shows up. I would like to get to know you better. I was also wondering if you need a beta for the story, if so let me know. I'm really looking forward to your next update, you really have me hooked. Ja Ne Kagehoshi-san
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  • From ANON - WeepingAngelOfDeath on July 07, 2007
    I love your story. I read it once before I went to work and the second time when I got off. Uou are doing an excellent job of using Jareth. I'm kinda curious to see if anyone whille use Inuyasha and make Seshomaru into Jareth or not. IT'd be different. lol....But I'm weird.
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  • From ANON - Kairidell on June 27, 2007
    I really don't have any stories on this fanfiction site, but I konw when I find a good story and this story is really, really good one. I have read alot of stories before but I keep coming back to see if you updated this story because I love it and I want to read more to find out what happens and if the Goblin King finds out anymore stuff that happened in Kagome's past. So please update soon!!!
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  • From EternalTwylight on June 23, 2007
    A wonderfully delightful piece. By the writing alone you couldn't possibly guess that English wasn't a natural language to you. Your writing is marvelous, I have enjoyed the story greatly. I really like the cross-over, I've been hooked on InuYasha for a while and my love for Labyrinth has only recently been renewed. I even got the movie again on DVD, since I don't even own a VCR anymore. I heard about the Manga, I'm really going to have to look into that. I will check back frequently for updates, that I promise.

    hehe Looks like Kagome is purifying the Labyrinth without even knowing it. Hmmm, I wonder if Jareth is going to be tricky and con Souta out of the answers he needs before Kagome knocks him on his ass again. *giggles* Ohhh, promises of lemons... well now that's certainly going to be interesting. For your storyline was Kagome in love with InuYasha or was it more of a brother-sisterly bond?
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  • From DarkRoseofChaos on May 09, 2007
    Yay! I like this story a lot. I do hope that you update soon, si'l vous plait. Merci et bonne chance!
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  • From Neptunee on April 23, 2007
    how yes, I really like this, odd paring but they work just right. Its like the Sesshomaru and Kagome fic that I read I can't wait for the next chapter, I really want to know what will happen next. Adding to my bookmarks.
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  • From Shi_koi on March 19, 2007
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    Finally! A wonderfully written, completely captivating and extremely detailed Labyrinth crossover fic.

    I simply adore the way you've managed to capture the essence of the characters, from Kagome's headstrong determination, to Souta's fierce loyalty to his oneesan, and, hardest of all, the fragile balance between Jareth's arrogant pride and bitter loneliness. (At least in my view, you may have had a different intention, but this is how I found myself perceiving the characters in the style and way you wrote them.)

    The way your scenes flow so smoothly, incorporating OCs which feel lifelike and fun, rather than the usual flat one-dimensional mockeries so many other stories tend to lapse into, quite honestly add something vital to the canon characters development, and thus to the fic itself.

    Your descriptions are easy to read and brilliantly emotive without becoming too flowery and overly heavy with prose, or falling into unnecessary dialogue with no purpose other than to waste space, and to be honest, this has been more than a pleasure to read.

    I found myself falling into the world you created here and keenly feeling at a loss when my journey through your character's eyes ended so suddenly.

    You've made yourself one more fan here, and I look forward to any more updates I hope you will be able to add in the future.

    Hugs,

    ~Shi-koi~

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  • From kathochan on February 26, 2007
    Update as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - Keliose on November 04, 2006
    Zenryaku,

    Ogenki desu ka. This is a lovely story, I am greatly enjoying the plot and the characters. You seem to have captured the pre-existing characters very well, and your original characters are engaging and realistic without being overbearing, or stereotypical. I also find your English to be very impressive. I am currently studying in Japan, and I have a very developed awareness of the challange of a completely foreign language. Prior readers are telling the truth when they compliment your use of punctuation and vocabulary, I also find your use of English slang very imressive. I am currently teaching a class on slang at the local Prefectural University, and your grasp is rather impressive. I look forward to your next posting. Douzo ogenki de.

    Sousou.
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  • From ANON - jen on October 10, 2006
    Oh this is great - wouldn't have thought anyone could pull it off but it has both spark and originality!
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  • From ANON - MinniemayH2o on September 04, 2006
    I adore crossovers and I'm glad this one is as good as it is. Some that I've run across have been horrible. Oh and as to the liquids, Think what happens to gasoline when it's lit, now invision that in a waterbottle, shampoo bottle, or (in your case) Nyquil. Someone tried it in England and now U.S. is more parnoid than usual. Great country I live in, huh? Such is life. I'm really really enjoying your story and I hope you write more very soon ^.^
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  • From ANON - DROC on September 04, 2006
    That was a great story. I hope that you update soon! I loved the unique twist you put on it by adding a bit of Anime into a movie fic. I did laugh quite a few times throughout the entire story. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kariskye584 on August 30, 2006
    I like the story, really well done and I'm impressed. I can't write as good as you, and I'm from the States! As for why no liquids allowed on american planes, it in response to a terrorist threat of sorts. A plan to bring liquid exlosives onto a plane that was coming from England to the US. It sucks but yeah, sorry about the nightquil thing. I hate flying myself and probably would have freaked out having to be in the air for that long.
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  • From ANON - Saedy on August 16, 2006
    Fabulously funny! :D
    the phrase, "settled on doing the potty dance" just about did me in with laughing! i must say i like your writing style, and agree on your feelings on punctuation and the like (though i myself am a bit lax in capitalization).

    loving the story!
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