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Reviews for He Didn't Come

By : WillowWoman
  • From ANON - Aiyklen on January 07, 2006
    Damn. That's just, all I can say.. I'm definately not one to like a story that has tons of chapters, but this one, I can make an exception. Fabulous, some typos here and there, but it's one of the best stories I've read that wasn't published as a thick novel.. I think I'm going to go feed my cat now.. God knows how long I've ignored him to read all this..
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 01, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - shivingdeep on September 26, 2005
    OMG WILLOWOMAN..BRAVO SWEETIE..BRAVO!! Woohoo, that was off the hook and then some. I'm a confessed and certified Riddick Freak..lol..and I LUVED..LUVED your story. I especially luv Rid/Jack stories and you did a hella Great job with this one. You had the whole Rid/Jack complicated as hell relationship down packed. The plot was tight...Jack's story was heartbreaking though..and if PB would've shed some light on her past...It probably wouldn't be that far off from your story....sadly. Jack is my gurl and it's obvious that babygurl has gone through some serious things..if she had to go around fronting as a dude. I myself have written a rid/jack story on here too..You might wanna check it out...Bravo again..
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  • From ANON - keyonnamc on September 23, 2005
    This story is truly remarkable. Absolutely amazing....I'm speechless.
    ../_/
    .(^_^)
    ()()()()
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  • From ANON - Lady Rain on September 17, 2005
    Wow, took me one whole day but I read your entire story! I am amazed at how well you kept all the characters..well...in character. Nothing of their attitudes or of the sort seemed out of place to me.

    I hope you write up another one soon too! I may be re-reading this one a few more times.
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  • From ANON - Nicolina on September 10, 2005
    Ojojojojoj! (Swedish :-) ) This is getting more and more exciting! You really write her at her age, I like that a lot. And poor Riddick... what´s he gonna do? I can really see Jack´s background being something horrible like this, why else would she be alone in deep space!?

    I spotted a typo!

    Quote:She rolled over on the couch and closed her eyes, willing herself to sleep. It didn’t work, though. Of course not. It never did. Sleep would some when it chose, and unfortunately for her, that was a rare occasion.

    "Sleep would COME... ;-)"

    See you *wink* Nic.

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  • From ANON - yarvarni on September 07, 2005
    read it from begin to end loved every bit of it! Wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Pandorag on September 07, 2005
    I just finished reading it and it was very satisfying. I liked it a lot.
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  • From ANON - DarkWolf on September 07, 2005
    Hell Woman. It's about damn time you got this moved to this site! I like it, course I've told you that before. But it is real good, and I can't wait until you get the other stories posted. Have fun!
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