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Reviews for One Coruscant Night

By : Pagan
  • From PJBender on June 27, 2005
    Your work is always exquisite, exciting and very sexy. You've spent a great deal of time getting to know these characters and it shows. If I may offer one small critique on the technical side: The two openening sentences in the first paragraph are both quite long. I had to do a double take on that paragraph, just like many times in German lit class (boy, do they love long sentences!). I'm by no means suggesting you should dumb down your work. Unlike Stephen King, I think one should never patronize one's readers, but I must admit that the paragraph caught me off balance. I am, of course, eager to read the next part!

    Aduxie :)
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  • From ANON - Rain on June 27, 2005
    Yay! New pagan stories about dark sexy anakin and his padme. I love your writing as you know well.
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  • From ANON - xtina on June 26, 2005
    Perfect. As always, you grasp Anakin's character beautifully and I like him better every story! Please update ASAP!!
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