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Reviews for Treacherous

By : Chriscent
  • From Goblingirlsarah on January 09, 2024

    Absolutely loved it, though the end bit with Jack made me cry... Good work, hun!


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  • From ArkaadV on October 20, 2012
    This is a wonderful story and it may be a bit more than reasonable to ask for an update after over a 5 year lapse but I do sincerely hope that you do. If you are still about please feel free to give me a shout over on the forum side where I am known by Arkaad_V there as well. Thanks and hope to read some more from you soon.
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  • From bloodravyn on October 18, 2009
    PLEASE post more to this, soon?!
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  • From Koneko17 on November 21, 2008
    Hi! Yesterday I found your story!! It's great!!! I've really enjoy reading it!! Please add me to your Alert List so I'll know when you'll update!! Please keep writing!!! My e-mail is Koneko_fic@yahoo.com
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  • From MsMercury on March 31, 2007
    I really love this story! I'm so happy to see you continuing with it. I really like your writing style and have learned a lot from you and not just from this story.
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  • From alenanoemi on March 05, 2007
    EARTH TO CHRISCENT... ARE YOU STILL ALIVE???? I've been following this story almost since the beginning, and sincerely think that a fic of this caliber deserves a beginning, middle, and END! Ok, maybe you don't plan on ending it very soon, but would you please continue??? Your stories are well done and I look forward to hearing more. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2007
    Dammit! Jack's dead, AGAIN. Dammit. But she had such potential as a psycho.
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  • From ANON - marina on January 12, 2007
    hey, really love this story so far! would LOVE to be on your update thingie. thx and update soon!
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  • From ANON - redplanetes on January 10, 2007
    JACK'S BACK! Woohoo! This was an awesome chapter. I love your characterization of her; Now she's really Jack B. Badd. Honestly, I really liked this story better before Bell had chilluns, but I'm still reading, ain't I?
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  • From ANON - Jay on January 09, 2007
    sweetness.
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  • From ANON - aquamum on January 09, 2007
    Excellent chapter update.......
    thanks
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  • From ANON - lily on January 07, 2007
    you and those damn clif-hangers!! Just teasing, I can't wait for the next chapter. and p.s., ignore people who say you're bouncing around...its called building a story with a plot. As long as you finish with a strong ending, this will be a terrific story (and terrific doesn't begin to describe it!)
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  • From ANON - alenanoemi on January 05, 2007
    Chriscent, I feel like I'm treading water in this story... where is it going? The beginning started off with a definite direction (Bell and Riddick trying to get off of the planet) and although there was no strong direction in places (after Riddick left Bell), it didn't last for long. I've been trying to figure out the point to the story for the past ten or so chapters. What is the reason for this new Necro campaign? Better question: what is the long-term goal for the two main characters? ...Family? ...Purpose? I guess that I just feel lost when the characters seem to simply be going through the motions, because I am too: I read each chapter and am left feeling that nothing happened. Let me know if it's just me, 'cause it probably is! :p Thanks! ~alenanoemi
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  • From ANON - aquamum on January 05, 2007
    Congratulations on breaking through 100 reviews - well done!!!
    Another exciting chapter !!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jay on January 04, 2007
    Coolness, you updated! this is my favorite story that i have read on any Fanfiction site. Really it is!
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