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Reviews for Labyrinth II: Jareth’s Revenge

By : SailorAurora
  • From ANON - Ladymoon on August 28, 2008
    I really like where you are going with this story, hope you update soon.
    Because I can’t wait to read more!!

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  • From ANON - Ladymoon on August 28, 2008
    I really like where you are going with this story, hope you update soon.
    Because I can’t wait to read more!!

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  • From ANON - Loki on January 14, 2008
    I love this story so far I cant wait to see where you go with it. Thank you for taking the time to write and post it on aff. Oh and PLEASE UP DATE SOON!
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  • From LADYWELLES on September 22, 2007
    MORE MORE MORE must have more please update soon TTFN
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  • From EternalTwylight on September 13, 2007
    Sounds like an interesting idea, keep rolling with it and I'll be looking forward to see how your writing progresses. I get the feeling I've read something similar to this, it's very deja vu for me, but you'll keep us on our toes with plot twists, no? A few errors though that are niggling at the back of my head and I absolutely have to put down. 1- Hoggle is a dwarf and not a gnome. 2- Sarah ate an enchanted peach, not a pear.
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  • From Luciana on August 11, 2007
    I got the comic for Return to Labyrinth. It's so cool I can't wait till volume 2 comes out. Also you are doing a fantastic job on the story keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Chihiro on August 01, 2005
    Please update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Aymiah on June 22, 2005
    oh please review some more, Toby was just getting interesting, and Jareth is his usual self. Keep it comin
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  • From ANON - Adaina on May 31, 2005
    Very good. I'm very interested in what's going to happen next. Keep it up. :D
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  • From ANON - TonyDiMeraslover on May 29, 2005
    I like this, it's got a good flow an a very good grip on what you want to get across. The spacing is good, an I love your over all concept. This has been fun to read, an thank you for posting it.
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  • From ANON - Ryuujin on May 29, 2005
    Oh, please continue! I want to see what happens here! poor Hoggle!!


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  • From SolaceFaerie on May 28, 2005
    Very clever idea. It is something I have not seen done before. You have a good style that is coming out in your writing, but your writing is still very premature and has not matured along with you yet. There are many errors in this story that simple proof-reading would have caught, and though I know the feeling myself of how eager people are to put their story out there, show the courtesy to your fan base to proof over it at least once. No one is perfect, mistakes are made, but the more mistakes the more it detracts from the quality of the story. The mind fumbles over these, and I think I would have had more great things to say about this story if I hadn't tripped so much in reading through it. Please re-read, but also please continue! You are clever, and have ambition, you could make this not just great, but wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Kasha on May 17, 2005
    I love Labyrinth II Jareth's Revenge, but where is chapter 3, and 4, and 5... lol

    You just can't leave me hanging.

    PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE write more!

    PLEASE!!!!!
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  • From Nesia on May 12, 2005
    Very good, I foudn teh maid outfit slightly OOC on Jareth's part, but that's cool.
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  • From Korde on May 11, 2005
    I love this story so far!! Please, please keep it going!!!
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