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Reviews for Sins Of The Father

By : AlexandraXI
  • From ANON - Akenaten on September 05, 2005
    Another great chapter! I am really liking where this story is going--wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Akenaten on August 25, 2005
    Wonderful! Wonderful! I think its going to be heatbreaking for Connor to learn that Lexi is the daughter of the man who killed his father...keep the chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - Akenaten on August 22, 2005
    It was a refreshing change to see an agent displaying more emotions than they do in the movies where they are always stoic, straight-faced and emotionless. Good job! And on a more personal note, the things Lexi's mother says during delivery were right on the money!!
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  • From ANON - Akenaten on August 21, 2005
    YAY--YOU UPDATED!!! I loved it--not too much detail on the sex part, but enough to keep it titillating and erotic at the same time. Good work on the whole chapter overall. It was heartbreaking to read about Smith's funeral, especially from his child's point of view. BTW, will you ever let the readers in on who Connor's mother was?
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  • From ANON - AgentBach on June 21, 2005
    Oh shit......I sense something.......uh.......incestuous.
    Maybe I'm weird. But then again....that would be interesting.

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  • From ANON - Akenaten on June 03, 2005
    OK, I'm a little confused--is Clint, Jeff and Lexi's stepfather all agents? (furrowing brow in puzzlement at the implications) Other than that, nicely done!
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  • From ANON - Akenaten on May 26, 2005
    Who would have thought--the Oracle and the Architect? I like it! I also like the way you introduce Lexi's histroy a little a time--makes me DEFINITELY want to keep reading!
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  • From ANON - Akenaten on May 22, 2005
    Yay! You've updated! I loved the way you made Thomas Anderson Lexi's father AND wouldn't you know it, he's the one who killed Connor's father. What on earth will he do when he finds out??? Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Akenaten on May 11, 2005
    What an interesting twist--I thought it would be the Smith we all know and love who would be doing the sketching, etc, but it turns out to be his son! Very interesting indeed....
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  • From ANON - Akenaten on April 30, 2005
    Smith being able to play the piano? There are hidden qualities indeed behind that stoic exterior--hmm, I like it!
    keep up the good work; an excellent beginning!

    Akenaten
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  • From ANON - Akenaten on April 28, 2005
    A VERY interesting beginning! The idea of Smith sitting for hours in front of an nude, attractive young woman sounds delicious! Update soon, I want to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - FloweringWolfsbane on April 26, 2005
    heheh, nice beginning, can't wait to see where it goes...

    Smth doesn't dres up on the weekends, does he? *grin*
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