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By : amistillill
  • From kimuracarter on January 05, 2008
    I know you probably finished this years ago, but I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed it. I loved the small touch that you never had our heroine reveal her name, so that we can all imagine ourselves in that role. I was puzzled by the avoidance of sex, but it didn't bother. I thought your characterization of Jack was well done. And it's a very satisfying Mary Sue in that he plays the role the reader wants to see him play. Thanks!
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  • From Bleachyaoilover on December 30, 2007
    gimme more......NOW! no seriously, this is th most amazing story!
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  • From Extraho on June 04, 2007
    oh no you cant stop there!!!! thats just NOT fair. i want... no need to know whats gonna happen!!!
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  • From ANON - Unolai on December 12, 2006
    WHY?! Did you end it there?! xD Love it, good job!! =D
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  • From ANON - Adraia on November 25, 2006
    I loved this story and please, please will you make a sequel? You honestly have Jack down to a tea. Anyway hoping and waiting for the sequel.
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  • From ANON - Em on October 08, 2006
    This was the best fanfic I have ever read... Ever. It was amazingly well written, and you got Jack's character perfect! I could not stop reading this story once I started, because it was just so interesting. I really hope you write a sequel, because the characters just went so well together.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2006
    oh sorry, that's my email :)
    irmakl@wp.pl

    dinloth
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2006
    your writing style is simply amazing. The world, the character you are creating are realistic and bring attention. I honestly was closing my eyes to bury myself in this fantastic sensation down my stomach while reading this story (and all of your stories including Jack Sparrow). But the sex scene at the end would be apreciated :D and I just looove to see him smirking this sexy smirk. Fanfiction is a great way to fulfill your fantasies but it's hard to write a good fanfic with a good idea. You managed both. my congratulations. fo my tatse I would like more words like "nipple" "breast" "wet" "hot" and things like that 'cause you're writting things hat got my over the edge but after ll those chapter I feel still unsatisfied :))) please write a sequel. and if you don't mind email me to tell me if you plan to write a sequel or a story with Jack Sparrow.
    (sorry for my mistakes. English is not my native language)
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  • From ANON - jessica on August 01, 2006
    OH, you MUST write a sequel! It's too good to stop here! We must have more adventures of Captain Jack and his "mystery name" lass! Great story. Needs more sex! I really enjoyed reading this one. One of the better POTC stories out there. And there are very few sadly. Please write more! If not a sequel to this one, then something else POTC related! You're so talented!
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  • From ANON - Bethany on July 29, 2006
    Absolutely wonderful! Sexy, incredibly funny, and touching. Extremely well written!! I completely enjoyed it from start to finish. I was sad it had to end... 4 out of 4 bottles of rum!
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  • From ANON - Peggy on July 28, 2006
    I LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT!! I would love a sequel, to see her trying to fit in, Jack taking her home. You did a great job! I look forward to reading other Cap'n Jack stories you write. Keep up the great job!!
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  • From ANON - Blythe on July 23, 2006
    i loved this story!!! if you were to decide to make a sequel i would be ever so happy :)
    Fabulous job!
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  • From ANON - Sun on July 16, 2006
    ...one thing really creeps me out about this story. Just like in Nowhere Fast, you managed to write a me that was me. I do own a Sex Pistols shirt and I love The Smiths, hehe. Though I might catch more attention than most with my dyed blue hair...

    Anyways, I am convinced that you are not only an awesome writer, you are my twin separated at birth. xD hank you for the awesome and for me incredibly belieavable and immersing fic.
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  • From ANON - Lupa on June 19, 2006
    OMG OMG OMG!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! It captures the accent and attitude of my beloved Captain so well. Please tell me you will write more, or at least another story concerning him!!!! You did a beautiful job!!!
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  • From ANON - MerrysMiko on February 12, 2006
    Oh you most definitely got his personality right. *is enchanted and continues to read*
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