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Reviews for Underworld:The New War

By : BotticellisAngel
  • From ANON - Emanuel on June 03, 2013
    Wow, what a great crossover story! Well done, well integrated into the various storylines and seasons! I'm normally not a big fan of crossovers, but your's is really well done! Also very peaceful - I didn't expect Marcus to be so... hmmm... rational?

    I enjoyed the whole Angel S5 tie-in a lot, probably my favorite part of the story.

    I hope you'll post more chapters sometime in the future.

    Thank's for writing and sharing!


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  • From ANON - Emanuel on January 05, 2007
    Wow, this is really an almost epic story! Thank you for not involving Dark Angel too much as that is the only one of the three "shows" I haven't watched. I like your story and can only imagine how much work you must have put into it, but please allow me a to speak my mind on a couple of things:

    1. I think the way you solved the whole Marcus/Lycans/war angle was a little too easy and peacefully. Actually, "peaceful" might not be the perfect word, but I think you know what I mean. The way "Underworld: Evolution" ends probably describes best what about your solution strikes me as not "realistic" (a very weird word to use in the context of a Vampire/Werewolf/Witch story review): two meetings and centuries of bloodshed and killing are forgotten, the Vampires trust the Lycans with their undead lifes and the Lycans gladly move into the Mansion. I find it really hard to believe that all the covenants and all Lycan clans simply stop fighting, no chaos ensues, no power-struggles take place and no "civil wars" among Lycans or Vampires ensue. Then again, you didn't write that, it's just something that I think your solution somewhat implies or hints at.

    2. Selene went from almost emotionless Death Dealer to loving mate/wife/mother a little to seamlessly for my liking. She also was way too willingly and quickly in somehow accepting Michael's macho "Me Hybrid, must protect helpless Death Dealer" routine. In my opinion you made her too weak and the Selene/Michael plotline focuses too much on Michael. Remember - Selene is probably the most adept Death Dealer EVER! Created by Viktor himself, centuries of training, practice and experience - it doesn't get much deadlier than that. Put Selene in a fight with an experienced slayer even (i.e. Faith) and I would really like her chances. Yet, while seeing your story unfold you somehow made her look almost like a mere mortal woman to me. Then again, that's just my opinion and other readers might have a different points of view.

    3. In the end the whole story revolves too much around/in the Angelverse. Don't get me wrong, I really liked Angel, even the 5th Season (which many fans don't seem to be too fond of), and I certainly can appreciate your attempt in trying to find a solution to how Angel's crew could win the fight against the Senior Partner's forces. Still, somehow it doesn't feel right. I can't quite put my finger on it, it just doesn't feel right. Maybe it's because EVERYTHING turned out peachy, nobody died, Spike and Buffy hook up, Fred's still Fred AND Illyra at the same time, Wesley survives, even Buffy, Faith, Willow and the Slayers show up - not to mention the combined forces of the covenant and Lycans - and everybody gets alongs famously. Guess I was looking for a little more friction...

    Still, a nice story which I enjoyed reading. Thank you for writing it!
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  • From ANON - K on June 29, 2006
    This was a great story, good job. I don't really watch Dark Angel so i was in the dark a little for that bit but the rest was great
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  • From ANON - Cross on November 16, 2005
    Not at all boring my dear.

    In fact this here fic gets better and better with every chapter.
    Nice work luv.
    Keep it up and expect many reviews from myself and others.
    You are a magnificent writer.
    You should realy think about a book perhaps evan a mini novel.
    Trust me writing a book is a bitch in a half.
    I have been working on the same damned storie for two years now.

    But again keep up the good work.

    -Cross-

    P.S-I hope the next movie is along the lines of this..I love the idea.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 17, 2005
    I truly enjoyed this story. Looking for the sequel next. You are a talented writer. BTW, I always thought Riley was a dork.
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