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Reviews for Falcon's Beginning

By : Raife
  • From ANON - Nefretiri on April 06, 2005
    I love Tristan and Falcon's interaction together. They have great chemistry. More please.
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  • From on April 04, 2005
    I just finished the whole story and this is very good, i just watched this movie the other day on my way home from Las Vegas, and I think you do very well in the way you write yor characters, this is a grat story I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 30, 2005
    I love it! Please tell me you'll update soon! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Sheiado on March 12, 2005
    Wow. I came back from vacation just in time! lol A NEW CHAPTER! OMG! ...OOOOO the smutty goodness!!!! This is totally a steamy hot chapter! *wipes the drool from her mouth* lmao
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  • From ANON - Meredith on March 10, 2005
    Great stuff! I hope you keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - Sheiado on February 28, 2005
    Damnation! lmao that word is so funny to use lol! Anyways, great chapter and nice job of having me drool all over my keyboard (what a sight, let me tell ya! lol). Very good that her and Tristan are getting out of the "just friends" phase and into the "lovers". Lancelot seemed pleased (good, he should be!). Well, if you're running out of ideas I can probably cook some up for ya? Are you up for suggestions? Just let me know! lol. Anyway, can't wait for another chapter (so COOOL!).
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  • From ANON - . on February 25, 2005
    its pretty please continue

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  • From ANON - Sheiado on February 23, 2005
    Damnation! AH! They got interrupted by that Roman! grrr... Another great chapter to satisfy my new obsession with this story! LOL! I totally love this! *squeals happily*. Did I mention Falcon/Lancelot as being like bro/sis is so cool! The scene with Dagonet and Galahad was funny. And Scary too~ (damn alcoholic! lmao). Well, I can't wait to see what more will follow. Please update! (but you probably already knew I was going to ask that... lmao)
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  • From ANON - Sheiado on February 22, 2005
    AWWW! That was a cute chapter *squeals in delight*. I can definitely see Lancelot pounding on that door furiously, as well as Bors restraining him. To see the "shocked" look on their faces when Tristan shuts the door in their faces, however... Gods, actually seeing *that* would be priceless lol. I'm definitely feeling the chemistry between F/T. Its so sweet! Anyway, I definitely want to read more (as you no doubt already know *grins*!!!). Spoil me rotten and give me another update! lmao
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  • From ANON - June Birdie on February 22, 2005
    I like it. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - me on February 20, 2005
    I cant wait for more! Great story so far :)
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  • From ANON - Raife on February 20, 2005
    My updates are coming, Sheiado! I'm just having a couple of problems with writers block! (I'm writing a chapter almost every day, running out of ideas!) Chapter four is coming though!
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  • From ANON - Sheiado on February 19, 2005
    YES! OOO ANOTHER ONE! This is definitely a wonderful chapter. Falcon kicked some ass! It's nice seeing her relationship both with her commander and with her fellow knights. Lancelot as Falcon's broham is cool lol (hay fight!). I am definitely looking forward to reading Tristan's reaction, as well as the others, with her attack. I almost want to see Tristan beat the hell outta the man (or kill him! lol). I am looking forward to more and you are doing an excellent job with this (three chapters and I'm already hooked!). Well, please do update in the next couple of days. I WILL be checking for it!
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  • From ANON - Sheiado on February 18, 2005
    Wonderful beginning! I am definitely enjoying this so far and you have introduced Falcon into the story perfectly. I like how you started from Falcon/Tristan's first meeting and then later to the present. I can definitely see how their feelings for each other are beginning to bloom.... OOO! I bet Tristan will kill the man if he finds out who decided to attack her. The second chapter is very well written and I like how there is a mix between lust, affection, confusion, and fear with them. Tristan seems to be realizing how he feels and is coming out of his shell to show it while poor Falcon is confused but realizes both his feelings as well as hers (and fears it). I can't wait to see how you transition further with their relationship and in with events... I take it you are making this pre-movie? or will the movie portion be added in later? Well, I will definitely be waiting. Update soon!
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