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Reviews for Trapped in a Pyramid

By : Jeremy86
  • From kin995544 on July 26, 2011
    I’m hooked on this story! PLEASE don’t give up on it! I’ll go mad! (Realizes she’s lost it)… uh-yah… *cough, cough* update soon, if you will.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2007
    why do you have certain words in little quote marks? Is there a purpose behind that or is it a mistake?
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 27, 2007
    Ok before I read in anymore...what's up with all the fucking words in quotes? You have the most mundane words like fire place and Buddha in freakin' quotations! It's really distracting...
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  • From ANON - Nobody1234 on November 07, 2005
    I just recently watch AVP movie at least 6 times already.. @_@ It just keep playing it on the movie channels all the time so I just watch it, lol. So then I decided to read fanfics for it and your story was the best! You seriously got to update this!!!! You left the last chapter very suspense like and this is me "NOOOOOOO I WANT TO READ MOOOOOORE!!!!!" ^_^;; DO UPDATE ASAP!!! *drops dead if doesn't read any more of this story*
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  • From ANON - Chancelor22 on October 15, 2005
    Dude- Where are you at? You haven't updated since February! This is a really hot story and I for one would like to see more! I mean, I know that we all have lives outside of AFF, but come on , 8 months of no updating?? That is just not right. You have to finish this fic or I will find some way to flog you. (lol, just kidding!) But really, please do not abandon this lovely story.
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  • From ANON - em hum on August 30, 2005
    the whole but ugly thing.... not good
    i really have mixed feelings about this story....
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  • From ANON - Scar Fan on July 13, 2005
    This story is good When will you up date
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  • From ANON - Jordy on June 27, 2005
    interesting very interesting more pwease....
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  • From ANON - Vega Daemonson on June 08, 2005
    More story please!! This is an absolutely awsome story and I want to read MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - Nahauja on June 03, 2005
    I really enjoyed this story, but I thought that using "cunt" was a little offensive to females. I'm not trying to put you down or censor you, everyone is entitled to write however they like. But as I said before you're story is great, keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Kenya on April 29, 2005
    This story is great. The character development is awesome, especially giving the predator names. Please keep going I see this getting better and better.
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  • From ANON - ayu on March 30, 2005
    nice one...love the fic...too bad that the predators had to fight against each other because of lex...either way keep up the good work..update it soon coz i can't wait to read more of it...
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2005
    I am hooked! I can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - Horny Devil on March 07, 2005
    Hey don't stop, please don't stop writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE, I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
    Ooh man they SHOULD make a film like this! This is better!

    Keep up the writing!

    ~^__^~
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2005
    So good! Continue!
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