Reviews for BAHIYYA 1853

BY : Duchess_of_Strumpetness


  • From MarksPet on September 05, 2010

    What a wonderful story. I always knew the Phantom was a lovely man.

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  • From brainfear on June 02, 2010

    Really hot! I loved Erik's innocence. That made things so much hotter!

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  • From phantomkitten1870 on December 04, 2009

    I love this story sooo much it was sweet and loving and a little bit steamy and the great attributes of a fantastic story ^_^

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  • From Duchess_of_Strumpetness on November 18, 2009

    Thank you for letting me know my fic had disappeared. Its fixed now.

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  • From phantomkitten1870 on November 17, 2009

    i dont kno what going on but i cant read it....*pout*


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  • From Duchess_of_Strumpetness on November 30, -0001

    Dear Blackrosephantom (and everyone else)

    I'm working on it! Pushy, pushy Its grown by about 4 pages so far so keep your minces peeled for an update notification on the Yahoo group.

    Thanks for all your support and kind words, it means a lot to

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  • From ANON - heather on November 30, -0001

    I love it! You are a very talented writer.

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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on November 30, -0001

    Greetings Debs and everyone else,
    Yeap, the review section has turned into a forum! I easily imagine cats and dogs in a big cloud of dust. =LOL= :P Anyways, I partially agree with some other reviewers' opinions. Especially about adultfanfic.net being a

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  • From ANON - Cait on November 30, -0001

    Oh My God! That was so sweet! Please continue.

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  • From Duchess_of_Strumpetness on November 30, -0001

    To everyone who reviewed Bahiyya, thanks very much. I could not believe that I got so many. Your comments and opinions are noted. Thank you

    PhantomMiddleEarthLover, I don’t see it as flaming so don’t worry, yes it was helpful pointing out thing

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  • From ANON - severina on November 30, -0001

    btw, i just read the little convo that's going on btwn the other reviewers and i have to agree w/ the person before me. i always welcome concrit myself, but i just can't see writing a dissertation on FANFIC! All fanfic is inherently AU in the first place

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  • From ANON - severina on November 30, -0001

    that was HOT! i love stories about erik in persia. that whole man/boy contrast was very intriguing

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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on November 30, -0001

    And what the heck is going on here??? *lol* This is fanFICTION, guys, now come on and don't tear it apart like some old newspaper! Of course there were some strange thing in this story, but I enjoyed reading it, kept those thoughts to myself, and I enjoye

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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on November 30, -0001

    I liked that a lot - especially cuz I can imagine both Gerry's Erik and Kay's one in this beautiful story. And you have a wonderful style that kept the story from slipping into porn. ;)

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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on November 30, -0001

    Brava Miss Jane!
    =LOL=
    Like you, I too like a dark Eric. I personally don't like for him to beat up his lovers, murder them, etc. But a bit of hair-tugging is nice. And spanking. And biting. And scratching. I put that in my stories, but sadly, I don't

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