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By : PrincessLemon
  • From KiraJenLove on August 27, 2008
    I have trouble imagining the Skekses having sex with anyone; for one thing, the Mystics and the Skekses are genderless. When they were in their UrSkek form, they were immortal, genderless and limited in number. But when they split, they were now *mortal* and genderless, which means as soon as all of them died one by one, they would be extinct. In the movie, the Skekses and the Mystics were described as a "dying race", because they were mortal and had no means of reproduction. We can even see in the beginning of the movie after the Chamberlain is stripped of his clothing, that they have no sexual organs.
    Even if they did have some, they would be reptilian; they do not have a mammalian "member" with which to copulate with a mammal like a Gelfling or a human.
    The only story of Skeksis/Gelfling sex I could "buy" was in the story "House on the River", because they were in a setting in which both had transformed into human bodies, but their personalities stayed the same. That is the only way I can see any inter-species sex involving Skekses (or Mystics).
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  • From ANON - elequenya on March 10, 2005
    I am a professional writer. If you want to do your very best, I suggest that you learn to use a grammar and spell checker. Your stories are decent, but both your grammar and spelling are atrocious. I cannot even read your writing because of this. You should go back to all your stories on the net and correct them. You never know who is reading them, like me. I write fanfics on the side for relaxation, and I wouldn't be caught dead with the mistakes you have consistantly made in all your stories. This is not a flame but an honest critique from a published author of many books.
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  • From ANON - Mitora on November 10, 2004
    Goood! Can't wait to see more!!!
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  • From ANON - AngelMeiru on October 17, 2004
    Neat story so far. I would like to see a human/skeksis or elf/skeksis hybrid being made (by reproducing that is *L*).
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  • From ANON - Victoria on September 30, 2004
    I like my fantasies a little realistic. Unicorns, for example-- a horse with bone spurs. Griffins? a mutagenic accident off the coast of japan.
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  • From ANON - Sailor Aurora on September 30, 2004
    Hmm. you know something? I had a feeling this would happen.

    I'm very curious as to why they keep on asking for people to come to the castle though.
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  • From ANON - Mitora on September 30, 2004
    Victoria, it is just a FANTASY story. Fantasy stories do not have to be 100% realistic. So what is there to complain about. It is like complaininout out a cartoon not being realistic, due to the fact that it is a cartoon.

    BTW, keep up!
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  • From ANON - Victoria on September 29, 2004
    If the skesis (skesi, plural?) takes one person from the village every two months, the village will soon be depleted. Remember, humans can only reproduce about once a year if you consider it takes a while for a woman to produce another egg after delivering a baby, and nine months gestation before that. Plus conception. If these people are different, say so-- but make sure its believable. Get out a biology book and review your reproductive knowledge, and if these people are erenerent, make sure its believable. Even if they're aliens, they can't defy law and reproduce every two months without there being SOME toll, such as infant mortality and a high incidence of disease. if not, they would soon deplete natural resources and overrun the plant. And how about some description of the bat? And the necklace?Andthe man she spoketo? Her mother and father-- whom does she take after? Or was she adopted? if so, does she know where she comes from?

    and bloody hell-- its chosen. not chossen. that would sound like, "Ch-o-ss-in," with the 's' like in the word 'Snake.'
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