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Reviews for Metamorphosis

By : hellborne
  • From ANON - josephine on August 09, 2005
    yes i'm having a lot of fun now update soon please!!!
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  • From ANON - smiley_one_83 on July 30, 2005
    I've just read all your fics. This one's my absolute favorite. Gender switch fics crack me up. More please soon. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - jesse on July 21, 2005
    this is a really good story. i love the way its written, i also like how youve played it out. but i am curious, when does jack get his body back (ohh i love jacks old body!!)
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  • From ANON - sallie on April 14, 2005
    PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE! Update!
    This story is great.
    You're one of my favorite AFF.net writters!
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  • From ANON - spanishgoddess86 on January 18, 2005
    I'm glad that Jack and Will are back together and rescued from being kidnapped. Now though I'm anxious to read how Jack going to get his body back and last how is Will going to adjust to his love actually being in a mans body. Anyway please update really soon. I love your work.
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  • From ANON - littlebird on January 18, 2005
    A ship full of gentle(wo)man-pirates, the Pearl is. Crewmembers massage Jack and nobody even tries to grope. (Why dont they leave the care for a woman to the other rescued women some of whom live in the captain's cabin anyway, if they are not out to grope?)
    Annamaria lets a stranger steer the Pearl, and an ill woman to boot, of whose skill she knows nothing.
    They are all a bit too caring and gentle for my taste, sorry. They are pirates after all. I would have expected half the crew lusting after Jack. Not trying to molest her (knowing she is Mrs Turner, and with a captain who objects to such things, and with Annamaria). But at least some talk among themselves, some lewd glances and remarks, the one or other proposition ... That could have been funny, the crew lusting after their captain.
    Good scene for Jack in the bilge, though. It's nice when (s)he sometimes shows that (s)he is a dangerous, er, person, not helpless, soft or a clown all the time.
    Ack, men fucking in bilge water. *shudder* Pigs!
    Jack might have tried to pile up the corpses and step on them to get the chain loose. OK, they would probably have been to heavy.
    Don't take my habitual complaining to heart; if I didn't like your stories I wouldn't read them.
    Please continue!
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  • From ANON - spanishgoddess86 on January 12, 2005
    Wow this story is interesting if anything is really said about it. I don't know if I really like the idea of Jack and a woman, but you do make it work as far as the story goes. Anyway I hope Jack does get found by Will and James and saved and then I hope Jack can get his body back. Well please update soon I can't wait.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2004
    Such lovely confusion! And Jack Sparrow making Teiresias' choice, whether he knows the precedent or not. :-) I hope you keep educating Will, wising up Elizabeth, and giving a bit of fun to anyone else in the vicinity, before you do much about the curse. But by all means, get on with the story, "bit of fun" or not!
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  • From ANON - littlebird on December 19, 2004
    That was nice. Now Jack only has to confess to Jamie also. He could hardly hang a woman for being Jack Sparrow, or Bedlam might get crowded.
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  • From ANON - littlebird on December 15, 2004
    Yes, that's Jack: more curious than shocked and exploring his new body intensely.
    I wonder how he/she would take to pregnancy, though.
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  • From ANON - JAZ on December 15, 2004
    tHAT WAS FUN BUT PLEASE TURN JACK BACK INTO A MAN SO HE CAN TAKE WILL
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  • From ANON - littlebird on December 08, 2004
    Mr "opportune moment" transformed to Miss "worst moment possible" - poor creature.
    I do hope they act through the ceremony nonetheless just to be safe, and that they have a nice wedding night.
    (Congratulations to you for your renewed existence.)
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  • From ANON - DjRainbowBrite on September 29, 2004
    Oh, uhh.. sorry if I spoiled it for anyone ;_; Woops... >_
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  • From ANON - DjRainbowBrite on September 29, 2004
    OH MY GAWD it's JACK isn't it?! It took me a minute to figure out, but then I was like why's it called metamorphosis? and it hit me lol. *wants to know who the woman is that turned Jack into a woman and sent him to Port Royal.. so I can have her turn him back into a man an send 'im to me ~grin~*
    I really like this so far, hopefully you'll add more? XD
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  • From ANON - littlebird on September 27, 2004
    This version looks less odd and more understandable than the previous one. That aside, I have no idea yet where the story is going, so I can't make any substantial comments.
    Good luck to you in Las Vegas!
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