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Reviews for First Hunger

By : Anukk
  • From Tamura on February 19, 2007
    yeah, that'll go over real well. if dracula can completely debase their master, they don't stand a chance. add in the fact that it IS dracula we're talking about and they're about to be wiped off the face of the planet. poor, poor sad vampires. and i don't imagine gabriel will take it lying down either. please continue. though if i may make a suggestion? your story is near perfect but there are a couple of grammatical errors, not so much mistakes but missing words.
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  • From ANON - kiki on December 03, 2006
    *greadily reads all your fanfics* ...sooo~ addicting! *drool* such hotness...Mmmmm
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  • From ANON - Cady on December 23, 2005
    Pleaz update

    Or email the chapters to me.
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  • From ANON - Dreamfool on November 16, 2005
    Anukk,
    i love your writing and story plots. they capture my attention like Vlad hold's Grabriel's. there is soo much charater and life to them. your use of discription is excellent and you keep true to the characters right down to their diallog. your a gifted writer and i have hung you in my shine of Van-Helsing fanfic authors.
    however you do not have a shrine. i have yet to see a completed fic from you:( i understand it ccan befrustrating when you have writers block for the next, but a good way to get over it is to ask for suggestions from your fans. please finish some of your other stories. i grieve for their state of neglect.
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  • From ANON - N.Springs on September 20, 2005
    Pwease update soon. *puppy eyes* Pwease? XD Seriously, this is one of my favorite Van Helsing fics- Ya can't leave me hanging like this! Ahaha, Dracula is gonna kick some ignorant vampire butt, eh?
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  • From ANON - FogWolf on June 11, 2005
    What can I say... Please continue with this Fic, I love it, I like the way you're telling the story and the interaction between the charcaters and your own ones.
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  • From ANON - louise on February 18, 2005
    yes, but exactly WHEN will it be continued!!!!!come on, plz continue, SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - Fiz on December 13, 2004
    MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - Carveus on November 30, 2004
    MORE!!!!
    Absolutely loving all ten chapters and am eagerly awaiting your next update.
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  • From ANON - God of Insanity on November 15, 2004
    Yay, update! Why don't more people review this fic? Its a great fic! Its an original idea, and its good! ^_^ I felt sorry for gabriel, and they it twisted around when dracula claimed he had showed lucien his place. So glad you updated. I hope to see more! ^^
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  • From ANON - striped_bouncer on September 27, 2004
    How wonderful. So intense. I could feel and hear and see everything the way Gabriel was... but then, I didn't know it was him until the very last line :-) Very well done, I'm already curious about chapter two!
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  • From ANON - God of Insanity on September 09, 2004
    Oh, wow, your fic is...wow. Its one of the best Van helsing slash fics I eve ever read. The idea of Gabriel being a fledgeling has never crossed my mind and I'm glad you thought of it. I just read all seven chapters and I'm addicted! Its very detailed and I really don't see any errors, so I can't really give you any criticism, but I'm trying. Course, in one of my fic, dracula is trying to make this one guy his bride...-_- Poor Amon. Anywhos, update when ya can...
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  • From ANON - aleera21 on September 04, 2004
    Wow that is so great cherie! I am completely engrossed and can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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