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By : CaityBear
  • From ANON - fruits of Eos on October 12, 2005
    woo that was sexy! let's see some more, i wanna know what happens!
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  • From ANON - kyo on July 04, 2005
    Even if you change the ending it's still a good story! I really think you should write more. Make them face some kind of challenage with the romans since being gay is frowned apone in the Christain religion. Please update it!
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  • From ANON - bonnie on February 25, 2005
    Hey there! That was an overwhelmingly bloody HOT fic and I'm dying for more!Pleaseohpleaseohplease think of a very angsty,hot and intense plot that will leave people breathless like these chapters left me! You're a genius!!!
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  • From ANON - Liloo on December 31, 2004
    hi! this is great! i LOVED the slashy sex scene! it was sooooo hot! i really want you to continue, so you can either make it really really angsty (sad) with a lot of thought to it, if you want to do the movie ending. OR you can change the ending, and make Lancelot stay alive, with the element of sadness as he getts hurt (and Arthur's thoughts), but with the relief that he is alive. and well, you can do WHATEVER you want! lol your the author! you have the power! ;P its a great fic though, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Sarmatian Knight on October 09, 2004
    Aw, your story is good but very fluffy so far. If you ask, well, I would say: no happy ending please.
    Your Knight.
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  • From ANON - LeiLu on August 15, 2004
    Very nice I have been desperately searching for decent slash froms mos movie so I am thrilled. I think you have handled the slash scenes very nicely. You could continue the story, but yes it's going to be pretty anghsty unless you totally change the ending. But then there is nothing wrong with a bit of anghst.
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  • From ANON - Angel on August 11, 2004
    What else can I say but hotness in two doses! :)

    “I know, beloved Lancelot. And we shall never be parted.” Arthur whispered, holdiis lis love close as they drifted to sleep together, their minds taken from the battle ahead for a few fleeting hours.
    *sniff* Sigh, I think I'll stay in denial land.



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  • From ANON - Callista Silverheart on August 11, 2004
    I liked your story. I thought it was very well done. If you do another story, make it w/ a whole plotline, not just sex (though you wrote those parts very well), so it will be last longer and hopefully attract more readers to write back and review. Can't wait for your next story!!!
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  • From ANON - Nancy on August 11, 2004
    Oooh! Lovely job! Very sweet. I'd love to read more.
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  • From ANON - cassimus on August 11, 2004
    This is a really well written story, I like it very much. I can't wait to read more of this lovely slashy story!!
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  • From ANON - Callista Silverheart on August 10, 2004
    Awesome story. I like the story of Lancelot and Arthur 2gether. Very well written and I look forward to more chapters and hopefully morestories, especially involving Lancelot. Lancelot is the best (and the hottest!!!)!
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  • From ANON - Angel on August 10, 2004
    “You shall be thought of,” he panted, feeling frustration well up in him as Lancelot’s clothes refused to be easily removed “as my greatest love.”
    Awww. :) Real sexy and passionate.
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  • From ANON - kitty on August 10, 2004
    it's good, keep going!
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