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Reviews for The Dark Lady

By : Harrison
  • From horror-fan212 on May 15, 2012
    i love this story. i was wondering if you could make a michael myers story similar to this one
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  • From JasonVoorheesRocks on July 14, 2010
    Akward Ending Much?..Pfft..I laughed
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  • From Breech_Loader on February 02, 2008
    This sucks. Your Goth Sue bitch just sits there in her soriety house and listens to the screams, and she gets into her tart suit? And Jason takes it?

    Jason went into that place to kill kids for sinfulness and then, mid-slaughter, stops because some scantily-clad girl grabs his tackle? If this had been Movie Jason, he'd have killed her even more for that. And the sex isn't even arousing. It's generic, flawed, and just a little bit practiced-sounding.
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  • From HardcoreHorrorChick on March 02, 2007
    Nice ride! (lol) Ahhhh...poor Jason...love it!
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  • From ANON - Bre on March 20, 2005
    Although that would be a nice fantasy(for Jason anyway), this fic is highly unethical and though I'm not trying to flame you, I'm just a little disappointed.
    Well, better luck next time.
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  • From on November 27, 2004
    That was a good fic, smut basicly, but it was good smut :P
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  • From ANON - La La on September 27, 2004
    LOL....She's lucky..Jason's Hot!!!!!

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  • From ANON - N. Fasciitis on August 04, 2004
    Oh dear... well, your writing style is clear well detailed, with good grammer and spelling. It's just that the extreme liberties taken with characterization, the sex and the nameless goth Mary Sue really did nothing good for this story.

    Avoiding from any comments on the content(because I'm sure you heard hell about that), the ending could have been a bit better... you just left it at a SWAT team watching Jason and a Mary Sue get their rocks off, probebly feeling more nauseous then the people who read the fic. I'm not suggesting you do another chapter(by all means, please don't) just the ending could be better. Maybe having the SWAT team shoot Jason to itty bitty pieces or(ideally) Jason killing the SWAT team and then the Mary Sue.



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