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Reviews for Please, Achilles, Please

By : StudioHuh
  • From PallasAthena26 on July 20, 2007
    great story. i love it. really romantic but not sappy. looking forward to read more. i am delighted to see that you really know your stuff, you've read the book, and youre making a great mix of both book and movie. i really hope he doesnt die though...
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  • From ANON - evelyn on August 10, 2006
    Seeing the last time you updated, I can only hope that you are still going to continue on with this fic. It's wonderfully written, ie: not rushed. I look forward to reading this until the end.
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  • From ANON - clavira on January 31, 2006
    *sigh* Oh my, I really like this ff - I think I have a thing for romances. Though I can't help but to think, that itis pretty much a... re-narration of the film. Well, you did change some things a bit, but basically it's the same. Do you plan to make your 'own' story out of this or will you just continue as it is (I wouldn't mind if you just tell the story as it was, but if you do: Could you puh-leeeeease change the end? I really want a happy end for everyone!)
    Anyway, this is just a very much typical I-like-it-please-update - review, but you could heed it heed it just the same ^___^
    hugs and hopes,
    clavira
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  • From ANON - caramila on January 11, 2006
    wow! Pilipino ka ba?if not, then i should only like to express my encouragement for you to go on with the story. It's all going on very nicely... Update soon, ok?
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  • From etherealprey on November 29, 2005
    This is a great story, I really do hope you continue it and write more!
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  • From ANON - otokogurui on November 28, 2005
    I'm hopelessly addicted. You are a wonderfully thorough writer and I am practically begging for more. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - michelle on November 06, 2005
    I love this story. Are you going to update??? I check periodically hoping you have posted another great chapter but... nothing. Please, don't keep us hanging..... It's just starting to get really good.
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  • From ANON - aCharmedOne on August 12, 2005
    Oh that's so beautiful, I really hope you will continue this soon. I really like it. The way you make Achilles and Briseis slowly fall for each other. Please continue soon .... pretty please.

    bye aCharmedOne

    bye the way your pictures are really good
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  • From ANON - Tori on August 04, 2005
    I absolutely adore this story! I winced when I finished chapter 8 and read that you found writting it tedious. I really hope you haven't given it up completely. It's incredibly romantic and it's a shame to end it before we get a proper sex scene in. ;)
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  • From ANON - Clover Chang on April 14, 2005
    I must say, your story may be the best Troy story I've come across so far...good job!
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  • From ANON - gg on March 23, 2005
    love the story.
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  • From on March 05, 2005
    This story is truly excellent. I sincerely hope that you continue it. i am enthralled. Hope you don't keep me waiting. lol
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  • From on February 08, 2005
    that's great..i love it
    please, update soon
    i can't wait to see what's comming!
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  • From ANON - Christine on January 04, 2005
    Yay!
    i've read all the updated chapters and it's better than i expected....
    i like how you've changed the meeting of Achilles and Briseis.... it sounds much more realistic.... considering.... in the movie, Achilles 'falls in love' with Briseis after knowing her for like two days!?!
    Anyway....it sounds like you've read the Iliad (The war of Troy or whatever it's called...) ... i'm realy surprised as i've heard that its very long and very, very boring......
    i've heard that The Oddessey (sp?) is much better and more exciting....
    i havn't read any of them but i've seen the oddesey movie and iv'e read summerised books on Greek Myths and legends.... although that was years ago....

    i love how you are putting notes and explanations at the end of the chapters... it just goes to show how much work and research you've put into this story.....
    Please update soon....
    you havn't updated since last year and it will be terrible if you stop just when the excitment of Achilles and Briseis meet.....

    just one quick question....
    at the end of one of your chapters... you say that after Achilles and Briseis meet.... the story will no longer follow the movie.....
    are you planning to follow the Iliad story.... ie. Achilles getting the poison arrow at his heel and dying ...etc? Or are you just going to make up your own version of the story? - Be totally different from the movie and the history?

    update soon!
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  • From ANON - Christine on January 03, 2005
    Hey... i've only read 3 chapters of your story and i just had to stop and reveiw on how great this story is!!!!!
    it's obvious you've spent alot of time watching the movie and come up with logical and intersting plots for each of the characters .....
    I especially like how you taken the time to actually get a story line instead of just going straight in with the adult stuff...
    i've only just saw "Troy" on DVD yesterday and was totally hooked onto the story .....
    i'm a big fan of Greek myths and legends and have been reading these magical stories for years so i know a bit about waht actually happened during the war....
    Even though the movie is not historically accurate..... in the movie ... the war lasts for like a month....
    in history recordings.... the war actually went on for ten years.....

    Anyway.... i'm blabbing again..... i just wanted to say that i love this story.... i like how you actually incorporate scenes into the story so it actually fits in with the movie....

    now i'll read the rest of the chapters.....

    update soon!

    just one more thing.... are you going to include the greek gods in the story? or is the sotry going to be like the movie where the characters just beleive in the gods?
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