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Reviews for The Reminiscing Process

By : DarkKitty27
  • From VisionsofParadise on February 16, 2009
    Well, you def need to get a move on with this story! It's been a long time since you wrote anything!
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  • From ANON - Lisa on November 16, 2006
    This is a nice fic. I like how you introduce your female character as being someone Mort knew as a child rather than the more prevalent plot device of her being his new maid. I think the idea of Lizzy just turning up on Mort's doorstep as a full grown woman, and then, watching as he is forced to confront his burgeoning feelings for her is both an interesting and completely plausible scenario. The love scenes between the two were well written and sexy. I like how Mort attempts to ignore his feelings for Lizzy and how she forces him to express those feelings. I also like how you make reference to the voices in Mort's head, but you don't let them monopolize the story. I also like how you never mention Shooter. Oh, how I dislike him...ICK!!!! I believe Mort is decent, but he needs psychiatric therapy and medication. That would banish Shooter for good, and we would be left with decent Mort only...Hooray!!!! I also like the fact that you made Lizzy 26. That is a reasonable age for a relationship with Mort. And as another reviewer stated, the use of a condom was a nice touch too. I did see some spelling errors and minor grammatical mistakes, but they don't detract from the enjoyment of this fic. As an aside, I wouldn't mind seeing a sequel to this fic.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 06, 2006
    Pretty sexy!
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  • From ANON - Cara on November 02, 2006
    Wow, that's a great love-scene. You did a really good job on that one.
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  • From diamond385 on August 16, 2006
    Well it certainly is hot in here don't you think?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2006
    Oh WOW I LOVE this story!! You should DEFANITALY add more!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Miya Sparrow on January 13, 2006
    now thats....a good ending *grins* anyway, this is one of those stories that makes me wonder why anyone would ever give that man up!....*rolles eyes* some girls heheh.....*sigh* he's so cute when he talks to him self ahaha I don't know why I just like it.
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  • From ANON - Rosie on September 15, 2005
    That was great. I love that you left in a very important element of the real story...namely that Mort is crazy and hears voices. But aside from that, he's one sexy beast. Please keep writing...it literally makes my toes curl.
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  • From ANON - Piper on January 05, 2005
    Nicely written. One of the best SW fics I've read. Any chance for a continuation of this story? Hope so. Would love to read more of your stuff. Good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2004
    I can thif thf three things that make this fic great.

    1. You remembered the condom that most fics skip. Ok, it's not that big a deal in the fanfic world but you used it AND made it fit nicely (no pun intended.)
    2. I love Lizzy! She reminds me of my cousin, Katie.
    3. Johnny Depp sex!!!

    10/10, wonderful job, kudos to you!
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  • From ANON - Patience on July 11, 2004
    I like your story a lot, its an interesting idea. I hope you write some more. Just one thing though, it could do with a little spell-checking.
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  • From ANON - Sternenlicht on July 09, 2004
    Wow, that was fantastic!! Your writing is wonderful and absolutely breathtaking! I really hope that you'll continue soon and write more of this!!
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