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By : DonnaLynn
  • From ANON - Skizzy16 on December 31, 2010
    Wow. i. love. this. story!!! I thought the ned of chapter 10 was fantastic!!!! It make me want to read more!!! Which i will do in one minute but i have to ask what happened to the chapter where acgilies rescues Briseis??? i was so upset when there was a huge jump :( I really did not expect patrclus's death to be a dream. That was really clever :) PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ronandhermy on February 16, 2009
    This is brillant. I"m really enjoying the twist and turns of the story. Great job. Keep going.
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  • From ANON - aaa on July 10, 2008
    very good but where is the missing part ;)
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  • From ANON - Sarah on November 27, 2006
    Wow! very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very good!!

    I love everything about this story!!

    a little disappointed that it hasn't been updated in a while though. Please update, I don't like starting an awesome story just to have in never be finished.
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  • From ANON - clavira on January 31, 2006
    *bites nails* Oh my... I hope everything's going to happen smooth - that is, if it's possible to be in war ^__^
    Anyway, I really hope you update soon, I'm looking forward to it!
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  • From ANON - Candice on October 29, 2005
    omg.. YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS STORY. I love this fic... I love Briesis and Achilles ... please update.. lovely work
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  • From ANON - splash on August 21, 2005
    is it just me ... or is chp4 missin the last half? great story tho.
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  • From ANON - aCharmedOne on August 17, 2005
    Oh that's great. When will you go on with this story? I really want to know what you have in store.

    Update soon pretty please!

    Bye aCharmedOne
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  • From ANON - madysen on June 12, 2005
    this story is amazing... can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - hibi on April 25, 2005
    that was an interesting way to stop Patroclus from fighting. especially since prophecy dreams fit in nicely with greek mythology. but it was kinda scary when achilles left briseis and said the jist of what he said to her while he died in the movie. very cute so far ^^
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  • From ANON - Meredith on April 24, 2005
    I love it! Please keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - hibi on April 24, 2005
    plz write the next chapter cause ^^ i can't wait to see what happens. !!!
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  • From ANON - on February 21, 2005
    this is the best Troy fanfiction i've ever read! when i'm reading this, especially the romantic/dramatic scenes, i'll get shivers and i'll feel like my heart stopped beating. I REALLY LOVE YOUR FANFIC! Achilles and Briseis is the best pairing and you made it better! it can't get any better than this but if it does, you should publish this in a book. I'm so addicted to this fanfic, i daydream about it in my classes. i'll seriously, like, replay the scenes over and over in my head and still get shivers. i get called on by the teacher a lot and get blamed but it's sooooo worth it! I LOVE THIS AND I LOVE YOU! please keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - gg on February 15, 2005
    love the story !
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  • From on January 27, 2005
    I love it....more,more,more!!!
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