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Reviews for Twist of the Fates

By : Sagittarius
  • From monochrome on December 31, 2010
    Oh, my... This was wondrous. That's the only word I can come up with to describe this masterpiece, and it was an absolute pleasure to read. You have a way with words, a sort of beautiful floridness that's rare even in the published world, and absolutely unheard of in fanfiction! Every step of the way it was emotionally charged, and I actually found myself smiling and angry and scared and absolutely heartbroken at different points in the story. Oh, and the ending... It was just right, a little bittersweet but full of hope for the future. Breathtaking. It's been a long time since I've read anything this perfect, and I don't use that word carelessly! Thank you so much for posting this. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!

    ~Ilaria B. Creeper
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  • From MaBelleNuit on November 21, 2009
    AMAZING. I can't even describe how well you write. The characters are so well crafted, that I can't help but love them (even the seconday characters such as Odysseus) You write love so beautifully, and the relationsip between Achilles and Paris makes me tear up and happy at the same time. I swear, you are one of the best writers I've encountered yet. Thank you for sharing...now excuse me while I go to my room and cry (it's a happy ending, but yet I feel so depressed).
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 18, 2009
    One of the best stories I've ever read on this site. Professionally written and flowing throughout. The ending was a stroke of absolute brilliance—tying it into the actual legend and yet still granting us a happy ending. This was a beautifully written love story and I enjoyed every second of it. I can really picture them being able to move on in life and live together forever in peace.

    Not only did you satisfy the romantic desires I have for a good story, you also provided amazing love scenes. I haven't read something that intense in a long, long time. Kudos.

    You truly have a gift for writing.

    Mizu.B
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  • From Corculum on June 19, 2007
    This was so overwhelmingly magnificent that I'm not quite sure how to review it in a way that will properly express to you just how much I loved it!

    Everything was written so perfectly, the fighting, the Love-making... *faints* Man, the love-making XD So indescribably hot I cannot praise you enough for it XD
    The way their love grew, blossomed before our very eyes into something so profoundly beautiful, and yet gut-wrenchingly tragic. Oh how I cried for the fate I thought was theirs >_<
    I was still so sure everything was going to go wrong, foresaw some horrible Romeo and Juliet ending for them ;_ ; But thank God, that didn't happen! One of those times where I've never been happier that I was wrong! ^_^

    This stroy was beautifully written, wonderfully executed, perfectly portrayed, and it did, if I do say so myself, have the best ending - the Best last line, ever.

    Praise the Gods for Happy Endings! XD


    I am anxious to know of your next venture? Do you have one in mind/in the works/something like that? *Hopeful*
    Your writing style, your ideas, I'm hooked xD


    ~Corculum
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  • From ANON - Sekre on July 07, 2006
    Wow ... I can't believe how close I was to crying ... I can't even express how I feel right now. Great writing, great ending albeit sad - I'm glad you didn't kill them off ^^ I hope to read more works from you.
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  • From ANON - Roald on December 31, 2005
    Really great story. I was always curious to find out how it would end considering this entire alternate ending. And I have to admit all very believable. I was even shocked when you let them live but continued to be true to Thetis' phrophecy and made sure that Achilles never returned home or saw his mother again. Great story, nice length, totally believable, just awesome!
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  • From DanishGirl on December 09, 2005
    Amazing story. I truly enjoyed reading it :)
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  • From DanishGirl on December 09, 2005
    Amazing story. I truly enjoyed reading it :)
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  • From ANON - Penfaerie on November 09, 2005
    Words cannot describe how SUPERB this fanfic is. I followed the movie perfectly. I LOVE how you used dialogue from the movie and the ending was GREAT! I was wodering if you would still have Paris slay his lover. WONDERFUL!!! I'm at a loss for words. I loved every word of it!!!!
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  • From ANON - TyRisha on November 06, 2005
    dude, i love you. honesty, i really do. this is fucking awesome. so so good. and i don't just mean the sex. *grin*
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  • From ANON - storyfreak on October 23, 2005
    Loved it, loved it. absolutly loved it!!!
    Held me captivated in your spell of writing from start to finish.
    There really are no words to discribe it.
    Masterfully done and I hope many more reviews upon you
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  • From ANON - Serpenteyes on October 17, 2005
    Much better than the previous Twist of fates you wrote. The best take on Paris/Achilles I've ever read!
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  • From ANON - chrysler on October 15, 2005
    wow. that was good. I still feel bad for petroculous but that was great.
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  • From ANON - Sagittarius on October 03, 2005
    Thank you for the all the kind reviews. AFF had jumbled up some of the sentences and words which I've now repaired, including that all important disclaimer. So hopefully any remaining grammatical errors will be wholly mine - I'm a stickler for spelling too hehe :D
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  • From ANON - catharsis on September 22, 2005
    Hello,

    I've finished reading the first ch. I like the premise of the story, the idea that it was Paris who was captured, and not his cousin, so I'm interested enough to continue on. But I would like to make a suggestion, there are a lot of typos in your story that a spellcheck could fix, if you can't yet get a beta. So far, I think your opening and characterization is more interesting than most and your story deserves this extra attention to detail.

    I'm not really a stickler for perfect grammer or spelling, but when there's so many obvious typos, I'd hate to not say anything. Someone helped my story by pointing those things out. I hope I haven't upset or offended you. The only reason I'm saying this is because I see some good potential in your writing.

    Thank you
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