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Reviews for No Mercy *revised*

By : ilya
  • From Cirilla on August 07, 2019

    I haven't read the original (yet), but this is amazing! The picture of Hector, bound to a pole, raped by Achilles is so hot. As hot as their fight in the movie was :D 

    And Achilles' men in this complete the picture perfectly. How they are aware what their master is doing and none will say a word against him, even if some may not approve of that. Beautiful. 


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  • From ANON - Sven on August 21, 2015
    Chapter three:
    “Brave, honourable words, Prince? What about killing a boy who had never killed a single soul before? Did he deserve to die more than that wretched wife-stealer brother of yours?”

    Correction:
    "Notice that I did not make it a habit to drag such children to battlefields, unlike yourself, o saintly Achilles of such moral high ground, he who has never spilled the blood of my kin and countrymen." Hector spat. "You must forgive me as seeing one dressed like you, armed like you and leading troops like you fooled me into thinking such a person I'd not known well was you -- when he fooled all your men into believing the very same, people who personally knew him for years. How utterly responsible I, and I alone, am for such a tragedy!"
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  • From ANON - Saemoon on April 23, 2014
    I love your story and I hope you will update very soon!^^ Achille/Hector is the best pairing ever!

    Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - zeynel on February 06, 2013
    Very good fic! Hash but well-writed. Will you continue it?
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  • From ANON - clarissa on December 18, 2012
    I would love to read more of this story, it has a loy of potential to it and I want to see what else transpires between Hector and Achilles. Make the story even more drama, angst filled; make Hector get pregnant with Achilles's baby while he's still a prisoner of the Achilles and they still despise one another. But so far its good and I like it.
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  • From ANON - midnighteyes on September 13, 2005
    I hope this story will be updated if not... Please let your readers know!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2005
    Oh, wow! This is so HOT! Poor Hector, and I think, poor Achilles too! Please continue with this tale!
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  • From ANON - ThriceW on January 07, 2005
    finally, something decent to read. I was beginning to give up! Hope to see more soon.-Thrice
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  • From ANON - vinchildy on December 01, 2004
    I really really like this story. Are you going to update soon.
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  • From ANON - - on November 10, 2004
    are you going to write anymore? i love this story! please do!
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  • From ANON - - on September 16, 2004
    this is a really good story, im really enjoying it. like the only one i can find where the characters aren't secretly in love with each other! its thrilling, keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Sarah on July 25, 2004
    This is bloody brilliant. I've never read anything from an autho una unafraid of being brutal in their writing. It works very nicely, and you have quite a talent for realism in your descriptions. I wait on the edge of my seat for your next installment, love. :)
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  • From ANON - Cg on July 15, 2004
    WOW!! you have to continue. I want to know what happens next so please, PLEASE!!! continue. Thank You.
    later
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  • From jianu on June 10, 2004
    Just re-read your fic... *dies again*

    I need to read the rest of your fic girl! You do know that don't you?!!?!? Guh...

    *need fic* *want fic* *must have fic*

    *hugs*

    - jianu
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  • From ANON - Angel on June 03, 2004
    The change to the end of chapter makes sense. I like that you show a previous attraction between Achilles and Hector in the flashback. The Achilles/Patroclus sex scenes were quite hot too. Poor Hector, courageous and defiant to the end. :( I also like your Odysseus characterization. It's very him.
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