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Reviews for The Right Life

By : PiratesWench
  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2006
    Uh...chapter 14 is the same as 13. Good story, anyway. Can't wait for the rest
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  • From BarbWireBarbie on August 03, 2006
    omg i love this!! With a shocking passion! lol i saw “Struggle for Control" last night, stayed up all night reading it and then today i saw the sequel lol this is the second night in a row I've stayed up all night reading one of your fics. Yep. I deem this rockin =D
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  • From ANON - SpiritOfLupin on September 28, 2005
    I loved Struggle for Control and I love this one just as much. It adds a different perspective to see Shooter in Amys mind rather than Morts. Theres is just one thing, chapters 13 and 14 are the same. Believe me when I say that I will keep checking back to see if it has been changed. Love it so far by the way. xx
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  • From ANON - Ana on September 10, 2005
    OMG! You've just got to update soon! I love this! Great sequel! Please please please continue this! 'Tis awesome ! :D
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  • From ANON - mayorst on November 27, 2004
    You are an amazing writer! Please continue your story! I want to know where it is leading what with Shooter now within Amy...
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  • From ANON - GylzGirl on September 05, 2004
    Okay, apparently begging is in order. I'm cool with that. HEY WOMAN!!!! I'm following at least 3 of your stories on this site and you've just left us all hangin'! Please update soon! I hope all is well with you!

    GG
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  • From ANON - TheDementedFerret on July 18, 2004
    *squeek* Very well writen, good twist. Wish I had read it earlier though.
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  • From ANON - sara on July 14, 2004
    hi!

    i read Struggle for Control on fanfiction.net and also the 'extended' chapters here, and then i discovered the sequel... which is just great! even though i liked the first ending of SfC better, but oh well :) Mort is just sooo adorable in this fic! all excited about Hallie (love that name, btw), and taking so much care of Alex... *sigh* and i really wonder who that voice inside Amy's head is. maybe Shooter, maybe not... guess I'll find out :) and btw, i hate Amy too! I was sooo pissed at her when i saw SW! and that scene in the movie where Mort drives to her house and thinks "this is not my beautiful house. this is not my beautiful wife. anymore", it's so sad! and she's there all happy with Ted and stuff, and Morty is all alone :'( that bitch! anyways, i hope you update this quickly! :D you rock!
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  • From ANON - Emmy on June 05, 2004
    I like it! Even though having it all Shoter-less doesn't really make sense. Still shaking from reading the first one, too. I completely blanched when Mort saw it was Amy. I don't like her either, but it freaked me, because I just knew it would be her.
    Strange, ne?

    ~Emmy
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  • From ANON - Jezrael the Jealous on April 27, 2004
    Amy's.. hurt? Dying? Oh, happiness IS. n.n

    Aw.. I love the couple! They are just so cute! You know what an excellent writer you are, right? You just know what to make happen. Real emotion-tweaking talant. ~.^ Wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Just A Johnny Fan on April 23, 2004
    OH HELL NO!! THAT WOMAN DID NOT JUST COME IN TO MORT'S HAPPY HOME AND START SCREWING WITH IT!! I THINK AMY GET'S WHAT SHE DESERVES, WHICH IN MY OPINION IS A GOOD ASS KICKING!!!! OH, POOR HER SHE FINALLY DISCOVERED WHAT SHE HAD AND GAVE UP, NOW IT'S TO LATE!! (Rolling my eyes and fake sighing) Nobody cares about her sad little life, she made her choice and now she has to live with it! I totally agree with not liking Amy!!!! SHE'S PATHETIC! I know this sounds horrible but when I watched "Secert Window", the many times I saw it, I never was upset that Mort killed her. In fact, I felt she was partly to blame for her own death, for obviously causing Mort to lose his sanity because of her indiscretions. I felt worst for Chico, then her! Ofcourse in your new story Mort never went crazy but that woman still caused him alot of pain. I was wondering who was going to be the antagonist role in your story with Shooter gone. Now I see that role will be filled with the desperate, whimpering Amy (Sticks out tongue and makes gagging noise). Sorry that just seems to happen everytime I think about her. Though I have a hunch that Shooter might actually make an appearance after all, just to Amy this time. At the end of chapter 6, Amy was starting to sound an awful alot like Mort did it the movie, and we all know what that means....(going to get the shovel). I love a good Juicy drama with a little suspence and Shooter would certianl tha that. Can't wait to see if my hunch was right and if I'm totally off base, maybe you could consider it anyways?(smiles)
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  • From ANON - Jezzy the Jealous on April 22, 2004
    OMG.. Amy is such a BITCH!

    I think you write her perfectly. All needy and weepy and b-i-t-c-h-y... Gods. I hate her with a shocking passion. >X

    Oooo! NO! What's gonna happen with Alex? Too soon? >.< Eeep! Poor thing! Pregnancy's gotta be hell.. well, sof thf the points, anyway. I wouldn't know. o.O

    NOT WRITE ALL WEEKEND?? *faints* Awful cliffhanger! BAD! *thwaps the author with a flyswatter*

    So I'm guessing Amy's gonna be a huge part of this?? Eheheh.. I hope the ho dies. XD
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  • From ANON - Kitty_kat26 on April 20, 2004
    Hey! this is heaps gd! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Just A Johnny Fan on April 16, 2004
    (Standing on chair clapping and cheering!) Ohhhh! You don't know how happy I am to see your return and with a sequel to one the best stories, I've read on the net!(Jumping up and down) Words can't even begin to describe how much I loved "Struggle For Control". Just the other day at work, I was telling my friend how she had to read it! I even offered to deplete my ink cartridges and print it off for her! Your Mort was so sweet and adorable (messy hair and all). I found your writing to be greatly entertaining and frankly, addicting. Believe me I put alot of important things on hold just to read your lastest updates, not that I regret it for a moment.(smile). So glad to see that the sequel begins with happy ending, but than again the sad ending has Mort commiting suicide (still a good ending), just not much left for a sequel. This new story is terrific (as expected)! Can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - amile on April 15, 2004
    Wow very interesting, please go on
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