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By : bluemagic132003
  • From ANON - anna on July 31, 2006
    well done.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 10, 2006
    Wow....wow. I just finished chapter five-one of the best written love scenes of any fanfic--particularly since it took awhile in coming. Please keep writing--now I know which author to go to!
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  • From ANON - KallistoG on January 24, 2006
    This...eee...mmphm...there are no words...

    You are a ridiculously talented writer! This little sex-scene there between Jack and Suzanna was one of the very sexiest and steamiest things I have EVER read...that is to say a alot, as I am a single 18-year-old gal, and as a result I read alot of stuff like this ;)....

    If I had a had...I'd take it off for you :)
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  • From ANON - DarkTigress on October 09, 2005
    I love this story, the way you wrote it is just beautiful... I would love to see more from you.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on March 30, 2005
    What a beautiful love story; made better by the lovely smut. Thank you so much. Always lusted in me heart after Cap'n Jack.
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  • From on January 09, 2005
    I missed reading this story while I was gone. I wasn't dead which was the popular belief, I've been busy with college stuff so I'm sorry for not updating my story and not reading yours. Please update yours soon and I'll try my best to update mine.

    -Chelsey-
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2004
    You're sure this is your first? Pacing, variety, development, timely revelations--you've got it all in hand. I want to go talk to a neurologist now, and find out how to get real life lovers to run the rigging as satisfyingly as your fictional ones.
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  • From ANON - Rozzan on December 27, 2004
    Lovely Magic. So pleased to see this fic finished and in such a wonderful way. Loved Suzanna's speech to Norrington. Also the ritual of her swearing allegiance to the Pearl and the ending was such a celebration of escape from confines, freedom and a new life and kind of love. Well done.
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  • From ANON - SpiritOfLupin on December 18, 2004
    I could wait until i'd read the whole thing but I just had to say something.

    "Well, Well, Commodore. Come to surrender the fleet? And this not even my birthday,"

    Ha ha ha. It's Jack! It's just what he would say...If he were real that is. cough cough.

    But yes, bravo. If the rest of this story is as brilliant as the opening chapter I am going to be hooked every step of the way. xx
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  • From ANON - Karna on December 18, 2004
    that was beautiful, truly
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  • From ANON - Beezel on December 18, 2004
    Fantastic. You are truly able to weave a magic spell with your words. I will be anxiously awaiting your next effort!!!

    Bravo!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - anasazi on December 17, 2004
    Absolutely splendid conclusion to an absolutely splendid story. You are truly a gifted writer and I fervently hope you continue your lovely, fervid writing. I understand RL can be a great hindrance, but it would be a real shame to waste such wonderful talent. So write a sequel, or write a different story, but whatever you write ~ WRITE!!
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  • From ANON - Ani Sparrow on December 17, 2004
    Sorry - too lazy and drunk to log in!

    Lovely chapter - I hope you do a sequel and soon.
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  • From ANON - gdladypirate on December 08, 2004
    Thank you thank you for this lovely story! I truely like it. A great Jack and a wonderful idea with Elizabeths cousin. She is a brilliant woman. I doubt though that my review can be as thrilling as your love scenes, they were so good to read and enjoye.

    Is this the end of the story? I would love to read more.
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  • From ANON - hellborne on November 23, 2004
    Well, milady, a wonderful ending to a wonderful story. Now you have to go ahead with the sequel...how Suzanna becomes a TRUE pirate...well, she's already stolen (commandeered?) Jack's heart...

    Sorry for taking so long to finish reading it...I've very little time online so I've had to do it in partial chapters. But OH, those partial chapters!

    Hellborne
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