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Reviews for A Pirate's Tale

By : Jack4Turner
  • From ANON - Sorrow on November 06, 2006
    I need an update!!! It's just to cute! *Squee* I can just imagine a chibi Will being too quiet but so adorably cute. And mini Jack with a bottle of rum! Sounds like he started early! Lol, well please continue. I'm looking forward to the update.
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  • From ANON - CaptainLizSparrow on September 25, 2006
    Why, me liked it a lot...
    Please continue, didn´t think it sucked at all!
    I found it very cute...waitin´ for the next chapters...
    *impatientwriggles*
    ;-) Liz
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on June 27, 2006
    I like it.

    Keep up the awesome work, coolsa.
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  • From ANON - Hikari on January 06, 2005
    Your fic is very interesting and is off to a good start. One thing, some of the spelling is rather scrambled, but that probably is not you because I have seen the same thing on different fics. I look foward to reading more and good luck with your writting.
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  • From ANON - manda on October 15, 2004
    i looove ur story so far i'm totaly hooked in... i cant wait to see what happens next, i hope u update soon ^^

    ur new fan, manda ^_~
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  • From ANON - Night on September 30, 2004
    You want a review?!!! I'll give ya damn review!!! I like it!! It started out really depressing, one of the reasons why i didn't cnue nue reading it until now, but, i llike what you've done with it!!! Please update!! I wanna know what happened to the Turners and what other twists you've given the story!!! Keep it up, cuz its really intersting! Thanks!
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  • From hellborne on April 30, 2004
    Hiya sweetie! Great job you're doing here! I know reviews (even flames) are like gold to writers like you and me.

    Only a couple of tiny details though...according to canon, Gibbs was with the navy when Will crossed to the Caribbean, and as far as I know (I could be mistaken...ask Pendragginink...she's my expert), they didn't take pirates or ex-pirates into their ranks... And I'm sure that Annamaria is about the same age as Norrie...so figure 30-33 about the time of the movie...so she'd be a little girl during your story.

    However, I like the plot too much to givadam about such tiny details. Keep going please! I love it!

    Hellborne
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  • From hellborne on April 25, 2004
    Very nice start! You've got my attention, now just write more!

    Great stuff!

    Hellborne
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  • From ANON - layne on April 25, 2004
    Clicking off the safety I’m reminded of the last time I stood like this

    Did pistols have safety's back then? Hmmm. Anyway, sounds intriguing so far.
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  • From ANON - bittersweet on April 25, 2004
    hmmm...interesting. when i read the first chapter, i almost didn't want to read anymore, cuz it seemed like a dead end (ew, bad pun). anyway, i saw the second chapter, and i felt i had to read it - good thing, because i've found another fic that i'll want to follow. your original characters add depth to the story, and i'm waiting to see what happens to them, even though we kinda know the ultimate result from the first chapter...ok, well, all of that babbling was a roundabout way of saying, "I like it! Keeping going! Add more soon!"
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  • From ANON - Cait on April 21, 2004
    OMG!!! I'm reviewing. You must must MUST continue this.
    Pretty Pretty PLEEEEEEASSSSSSSSSSSEEEE! with whipped cream and a cherry. lol
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  • From ANON - Theresa on April 02, 2004
    Hey! That's not NICE! You can not just leave the reader hanging there at the end of your story. I demand more, I want to who was speaking, and I want to know how they got there. I want you to post the next part as soon as possible. Pleaaaassseeeeee.
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  • From ANON - Rosepetal2001 on April 01, 2004
    Please Update I Would like to read and find out where this is going thank you.
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  • From ANON - bloomsgirl on April 01, 2004
    i liked it alittle too short and kinda sad death poor pirate ok well i think you should write more :)
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