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Reviews for Struggle For Control

By : PiratesWench
  • From missbliss on January 23, 2007
    that was AMAZINGLY good!
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  • From ANON - Ana on September 10, 2005
    Awwww! I absolutely loved your story! Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Jacquelin Sparrow on November 01, 2004
    Needless to say, I liked the happy ending much better than the other...the not-so-happy one drove me to tears, though, and that's not an easy thing to do. Both were very well written...hell, the whole thing was well written!! You're right, though. Mort deserved a happy ending. I'm of the firm belief that if someone had given him a hug during the whole ordeal w/ Shooter in the movie, Amy and Ted would still be alive. What that character needed, you certainly gave to him.

    Thanks. I'm sure he would.
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  • From ANON - untouchable on June 29, 2004
    I cried at the 'not so happy' ending!
    Dammit, i just couldnt stop the tears!
    And when Mort-ghost put his hands on her stomach but disappeared after....OOOOOWWWWW!
    So cute, so sad, so unfair....dammit...
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  • From ANON - Emmy on June 05, 2004
    Oh... My... God... I'm shaking so hard I can't type properly. I mean that. I almost started hyperventilating when Mort let himself shut down, seriously. I actually prefer the darker ending, and I'm not sure why. It seemed more fitting, you know? When he just... put the hat on and pulled the trigger... I almost cried. The only time I've ever been like this after reading something is after I read Harry Potter 5 and Sirius died. The ending played out like Alex's dream after all. That was probably what made it seem more fitting, too. And Shooter being a real person, killed for his crimes... It scared me more than a little, I'll say. I honestly can't believe I've wrn thn this much, the amount my hands are shaking right now. Not one spelling error either, wow. I fell in love with the story from the first chapter. It has to be one of *the* most well written fanfictions I've *ever* read, including one 67 chapter long Gundam Wing/Sailor Moon crossover. Scratch that, it *is* the *single most well written* fanfic I have *ever* read. Full stop.
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  • From ANON - AK on April 21, 2004
    Hehee that was fun, my name is Alex too so I pretended it was me..until the end though. It made me cry so much...aww poor Alex! I don't know how she could manage! You are very taltented writer :) Thanks for that!
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  • From ANON - Depp Lovin\' Dev on April 10, 2004
    omg i read both the endings and they were both perfect! *crying happy/sad tears* I can't decide which one i would pick! I mean, if he didn't kill himself, Shooter could always come back and hurt the baby...but the happy life with Alex is just so wonderful, and he really should have left Amy in the first place. You have made everything from Secret Window right again, and now I know that it doesn't end with a braces-clad loser hiding his wife's dead body under a garden of corn! It was absolutely amazing, the best fanfic i ever read, thank you soooo much!
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  • From ANON - Nomi_clawskull on April 10, 2004
    Wow... I linked to the love scene from fanfic.net... and yourire ire story was beautifully done. The scene just fits and it almost made me cry it was perfect! Can't wait to finish the fic.
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  • From ANON - pirate~princess on April 09, 2004
    OMG! I LOVE this story! I feel really bad about not having reviewed until the end, but I mostly just have time to read the latest updates and then sign off, but now I have time. This is a fouslouslly well-written story. The characters are very believable and I absolutely love Alex and Julia. I hope that you keep writing fan-fiction, you are very good at it! Maybe a sequel to this one?! (wink, wink):). Again, a wonderful story and I really enjoyed reading it!
    -pirate~princess
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  • From ANON - Jezrael the Jealous on April 09, 2004
    Awwww! I LOVED this! Absolutely loved it! I could, like, picture it all in my head. Everything. I liked this ending a lot better, obviously.. it was just so fitting. Mort is happy, Julia is not without a father, Alex is the size of a beluga whale.. that's how things should be, y'know? n.n

    This story was excellent. You know that I'm prolly gonna hang around and stalk you now, right? I'm willing to bet that all your stories will be as wonderful as the two I have already read. So.. yeah-p! I'm in for the long haul. ::Whips out a pop tent, a case of Mountain Dew, and the s'more makings.::
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  • From ANON - Just A Johnny Fan on April 09, 2004
    Ok, I guess I should have read the chapter, "Past and Present" before I decided to review your story's ending? THANKS for this happy ending, I loved Mort to much to see his life end so tragically. I like both endings. Your sad one was good and seems more like a real ending that you would have in a novel or at the end of a movie, just because it was so unexpected. But for someone like me that had liked Mort, even at the end of the movie "secret window", and fell totally in love with him because of the way you wrote him in your story, it was just to heartbreaking. I've just grown to attach to this story and your characterization of Mort, that I could'nt bare to see it end like that, even if it was an interesting ending from a readers point of view. I like having both endings to choose from. Like I've said before and will say again, GOOD JOB!!!!
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  • From ANON - Just A Johnny Fan on April 09, 2004
    I know, I kinda of joked about crying in my last review. But seriously I have tears in my eyes right now. Oh, I knew Mort was a good guy deep down. I still can't believe he killed himself. I'm glad you made Shooter a ghost, instead of having Mort really be crazy. It make what he did so much more sacrificing. You did a wonderful job of writing this story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, you should be very proud of it. I hope that you will contiune writing more fanfiction because you certainly have talent, Just promise me that your next story will have ae hae happier ending.(CLAPPING) WELL DONE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jezrael the Jealous on April 08, 2004
    OMG! He's gonna kill himself?! AH?! Is he gonna try to shoot Shooter, himself, or Julia and Alex when they get home? AEERRRRGHHHH! What? Oh-my-god, this was more awful than I thought! A cliffhanger, you said! Tad bit of a damn understatement! ::Wails!::

    Noooo! I LOVE MORTIEEEE! *sob*
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  • From ANON - Agey on April 08, 2004
    Damn cliff hanger. Really good. Can't wait for the ending......
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  • From ANON - Just A Johnny Fan on April 08, 2004
    OHHH! So Sweet! (wiping tears away) Alex is a great women for being so supportive. I'd like to think I would be undendinnding too, but that's a scary thing to hear the person you love is hearing voices and seeing people that aren't there. That's a situation I doubt I could handle even if the guy looked like Johnny Depp. What am I saying???? I must of went a little crazy myself, to say that! If he looked like Johnny Depp, I would'nt leave him even after I found out he's a psychopath. Let's face it, if I'm going die it might as well be at the hands of someone as captivating as Johnny! (Laughs) But seriously, is Mort going to remember about killing his wife and if he does is going to tell Alex? I mean she's supportive now but it's a whole different story when you find out your lover is a murder, wheiter he was mentally unstable at the time or not. Looking forward to another amazing chapter from you soon! (smile) P.S Thanks for the quick updates!
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