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Reviews for Power of the Sparrow

By : hellborne
  • From SpiritVampire on July 17, 2006
    Argh!! continue please!!! this is a fantastic story i always imagined Jack talking to the Pearl heh bit of a bitch though isn't she? anyway please update soon i'd love to see how this ends. It's nice to see friendly Norrington I thought the movie made him too pompous for his own good. Thanks for a great read and now i'm off to bed lol!
    Yami
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 24, 2006
    May you live in peace in haven. Forever...*Bows head*
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  • From ANON - Jaque on January 08, 2006
    I pray that you are in peace and harmony and I thank you for your beautiful works. XXX
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2006

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  • From ANON - JoxBox on December 29, 2005
    This story is great !
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  • From ANON - Marie on November 30, 2005
    Great story I cant wait to read more!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - AREWEN MELETHERON on November 26, 2005
    THAT WAS TRULY SENSATIONAL.... BUT DO DO BELIVE YOU SHOULD CONTINUE ON WITH A SEQUEL SO YOU DON'T LEAVE THE READER HANGING . SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

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  • From ANON - anon on November 26, 2005
    Wow ....I mean wow that was unbeliveable . you realy managed to capture my attention and keep it . So from one writer to another I say carry on with this great thing you've got her. it was truley insperationaly! :) KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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  • From ANON - Rickie on September 29, 2005
    I really love your story and i hope you're going to update it soon!
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  • From ANON - Apollo on September 06, 2005
    --giggles evilly-- Well, you did say you wanted reviews in turn for posting chapter 18, no? I gave you reviews!

    Ah well, on to the real review....

    First off, I read the entire thing all in one sitting - Not a first for me, but it does take a good story for me to do so...Then again I did have the day off...Nah, it's cause it was a good story.

    I adore the way you wrote the BDSM parts, very interesting. They are some of the better scenes I've seen written here on AFF. I'll admit that the discription in some could have been a little better so as to better create the scene in my mind...But then again, I've always been a big one on visualizations.

    The way that Jack responds differently to one Turner than the other, an interesting development. I can't say that I've seen, IRL alot of instances where someone who enjoys pain as much as Jack does responds just as passionatly to the softer side of things. One thing that did surprise me was Jack being the bottom, I have always seen him as a top, but you did an excellent job of setting why he was.

    Now, as to the Pearl, that an interesting turn honestly, her being able to visit like that. I can't say I enjoyed the het part, but it was an interesting development.

    Now here's my question...HOW MANY MORE TIMES ARE YE GONNA KILL JACK? or try to kill him? I swear you are going to give me a heart attack with how you are going on.

    Now a rant....HOW could you have cut off his hand???? THAT was evil! How's he suppose to captain a ship and sail it correctly? And even more importantly, how's he gonna fully pleasure Jack? I mean the one hand on manhood, a finger probing his insides....Think about ALL the pleasure our boi's are going to miss because of what you did? And what about a hand to pleasure Jack and another to hold his hip to steady himself as he pounds into Jack? HUH? Huh?? did you think of THAT? Well...I'm waiting............

    ^.^
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  • From ANON - Apollo on September 06, 2005
    Reviewed it ^.^
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  • From ANON - Jenny on August 31, 2005
    Loved it, loved it...please keep updating..loved Pearl love triangle too what a great idea...Thank you!
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  • From ANON - aCharmedOne on August 25, 2005
    Oh you evil evi evil thing, how can you write such a cliffhanger? That is so mean!!!!

    Update PLAESEEEEEE!!!! and fast.... lest I die of anticipation.

    Bye aCharmedOne
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  • From ANON - aCharmedOne on August 25, 2005
    Very interesting story. Have to read some more chapters. but thougt i write a review now.

    bye aCharmedOne
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  • From ANON - Aleerah on July 19, 2005
    YOU CAN NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCE KILL JACK SPARROW! Tht would mean tht Pearl would get wht she wants and poor Will would be all alone.
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