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Reviews for Break My Wings

By : painfulwhispers
  • From ANON - ????? on August 11, 2005
    You havent updated in forever you have to its such a good story but Jack and Will must get together in the end they just belong together so plz plz update i love the story!!!
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  • From ANON - S_Delioncourt on April 03, 2004
    Wonderful story! Everything is perfectly described! You've got a great plot line going. The only problem I hwithwith it is that the chapters are too short! I like your story, tough cookie. On a side note, avoid milk.
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  • From ANON - vanapira2000 on March 25, 2004
    oh this story is just so beautiful yet so heartbreaking at the same time.update soon!
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  • From ANON - lilith on March 06, 2004
    Thank you =) Now I get it. I hope you don’t think that I don’t like the story, I’m just out of coffee and I need a longer minute to understand few things :P Now everything is making perfect sense.
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  • From ANON - Frankenmuth on March 05, 2004
    *wants to pet Jack and tell him everything will be okay* (I'm such a sap)

    Awe, poor Jack.., he, he kinda did...*motions with head* that *grunt*...and...

    AGG! Can't decide how to feel!

    Write more, so I can make up my mind! *yells* END THE TORMENT!

    *Laughs at self*
    I'm silly
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  • From ANON - lilith on March 05, 2004
    great story but there’s one thing I don't understand. Will was raped by Jack and he was almost dead but why all of a sudden he’s „starving, weak and battered for weeks” ? I get the “lost a lot of blood” part but you mean to tell me that Jack treated him like this all the time ?
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  • From ANON - Ani Sparrow on March 03, 2004

    No-o-o-o! Please update this, you can't leave it there! It's a great story that has potential to explore Jack and Will's characters more.
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  • From ANON - Lydia NightShade on February 29, 2004
    OMG!!

    Why have I not seen this before? Well, I'm kinda glad I haven't... I'm having a rehap of insomnia if that's even the correct phrase..cancan't think right now... I'm amazed I'm typing lol! But I completely loved it! Especially the rape, I think you've got the emotions so down pat. I can really feel them in my gut. I get that tingle... doesn't happen that often. I really like how you've portrayed Jack, but I don't quite understand why Will suddenly "died".... it is really interesting though. I can't wait for more. I hope you update soon. I can't really offer much advice... afraid my muses are all tapped out with all my shiznit. But take heart.... loss of direction comes to us all and I'm sure you'll figure it out. I would like them to get back together though....

    I think you should have Will seeking out Jack so that they can talk about what happened at least.... I'm not a big fan of HET so I might be a bit biast against a Will/Elizabeth...

    ~lydia~
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  • From ANON - kitti on February 25, 2004
    Please write more!!! im desperate its brilliant! lol :)
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  • From ANON - Rutaari on February 24, 2004
    AWWW!!! That's soooo sweet! Poor Jack! He feels so wretched! And Will doesn't even care!? You CAN NOT let Jack leave Will, or Will leave Jack! You can't! They BELONG together! You hear me!? They BE.LO.NG TO.GETH.ER!!! I'm off my high horse now... thank you.
    Great job! Cheers, mate!
    Rutaari
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  • From ANON - Mahie Sparrow on February 24, 2004
    Hello! It's a nice story. You should continue. Um,I was even thinking about few ideas as I read. I keep doing that,lol. Seeing that you asked,I'll tell you. Since Jack promised to let Will go if the boy lived,Jack should let him go. Period. Will goes away,finds Elizabeth again,but then he decides it's Jack the one he really loves. He can be disappointed with something about Elizabeth...he'll go find the Pearl again and will forgive Jack. Oh,please write some smut after that. ;) Hope that helps. Mahie
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  • From ANON - Rutaari on February 20, 2004
    NOOO! How could you do that to our poor muffin!? Jack isn't a bad man! He just doesn't know himself. As Robin Williams said, and I quote, "God made one mistake in his creation of men, and that was that he gave them a brain and a penis and only enough blood to run one at a time." I can't wait to see what Will thinks of Jack after this.

    I love your style of writing! You obviously passed English class with flying colors! I was wondering, though where you say "Jack proclaimed with utter serenity." if you meant to say "Jack proclaimed with utter sincerity." Just curious. Anyway, keep it coming!
    XOXOXOXO!
    Rutaari

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  • From ANON - Rutaari on February 19, 2004
    Wow! I love this fic!!! The way you say Liz "haunts Will's soul" is really cool! Poor Jack! Let him get Will back!!! Please! Update soon! I'll review more later... sorry so short.
    Rutaari
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  • From ANON - Mahie Sparrow on February 18, 2004
    Oh that was so beautiful and so sad. I got a little irritated with Will. What if he's making Jack believe he loves him when he doesn't? But hopefully everything will be alright for them. :) Please write more? Cheers,Mahie
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