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Reviews for Wicked Game

By : Pagan
  • From ANON - Jade_Max on January 17, 2012
    This was utterly dark and fantastic - but oh so true to character in my opinion.

    Anakin's jealousy, his wild accusations; his thought processes and eventual actions were very believable... even his lack of remorse at having forced Padme's hand to claim her was totally within his character, in my opinion. The darkness inherent in him is so well fleshed out. Obsessive love is what this portrays and it's superbly done.

    Padme's reactions to Anakin, especially when she questions if Anakin would have stopped had she told him to - and doesn't honestly believe him [implied though it was] - was very well done.

    Additionally, experienced and darkly purposeful Anakin is hot; not giving Padme a chance to surrender is totally characteristic of what we've seen of him elsewhere.

    You did a great job with this; an excellent read!
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  • From ANON - Laurachan on January 23, 2006
    I will never tire of reading this wonderful story!
    You're so skilled!
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  • From Evanscent on January 21, 2006
    ...wow. I was instantly entrhalled by the beautiful trapestry of your words... only to be jogged and twisted by the complete passion and aching need by the characters, Anakin in particular. I am completely amazed. You have captured the Anakin we all see when we close our eyes; you have made him human. And so I repeat: ...wow.

    -Keely
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  • From ANON - Kavchan87 on June 04, 2005
    This is one of the most beautiful and sexiest stories I've ever read (and I've read plenty): you captivated me w/ your writing and "your" characters: I just love Anakin being so dark and sex.

    I completely love it.
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  • From ANON - Edgy on June 04, 2005
    Wow... it is me or the room is really hot?
    Great work! Anakin is just soo sexy!
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  • From ANON - Laurachan (too lazy to login) on June 04, 2005
    I love this story! It's absolutely gorgeous! It's dark and hot and you've got a great writing-style.
    10 rewievs are really too few for a masterpiece like this!
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  • From ANON - sgdkinwgk on June 01, 2005
    You. are brilliant.


    I love you.


    this is the sexiest thing I've ever read.


    I want. Anakin.

    so bad.

    SOOOO BAD.


    ...he reminds me of my boyfriend, actually, in this fic. Not so ragingly hormonal, but stubborn and dark and growly in sex, and possessive. Extremely possessive. "MINE. *THRUSTTHRUSTTHRUST* *Puu~~~rrr~~~*"
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  • From ANON - nathpek on March 25, 2004
    There is a part missing, I'm sure there is a part missing. I want to know too what he wanted to do with her in this dress!!!! Imagination is not enough, ...maybe it is, but I would have prefer to read it.
    Beautiful story as usual.
    Nathalie
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  • From ANON - Micky on February 26, 2004
    Wow!! That update was amazing. You have got the best P/A fanfiction on the net!!! I can hardly wait for another update.
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  • From ANON - Kellyb on February 23, 2004
    To Jedinight85: I do understand what you're saying and I have to admit I never thought of it that way before. However, I believe that 'gods' is a generic oath/exclamation rather than a religious one for Anakin. But having said that, he is also unique and he doesn't always follow the Jedi Code. And when you consider the fact that he spent the first 10 years of his life outside the Temple, I think you have a person who mutters 'gods'! the same way people say 'Oh great'!, etc. because it's a habit from childhood. The term 'gods' is really a fandom creation and I believe that it is appropriate for the SW universe. I am a canon freak so I try my utmost to stay within the SW universe at all times. I very carefully choose my words and avoid earth slang because I think it jarrs the reader out of the story. Besides, when a person is having sex or comtemplating the love of their life, they don't say stuff like 'Force'! or 'Sith'! or if they do, it sounds inappropriate to the situation. So I'm going to stick with it as a habit that Anakin just can't shake :-)
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  • From ANON - jedinight85 on February 23, 2004
    This is a really good story. But one thing that bothers me as a SW expert is the fact that Anakin, a student of the Force, mentions "Gods" on more than one ocassion. Among other things Jedi is a religion, which he's fold fod for 10 years now. In short, in Star Wars there are no gods, only the Force. A Jedi of all people understands this.
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  • From ANON - troublegirl on February 20, 2004
    Yeah! Kelly B is at it again! I love love love your work, and have read all of your stuff. Extremely hot, very sensual, just the right amount of dark. Anakin is not the innocent; I love that since most stories tend to portray him as such. The fact that he would manipulate Padme makes sense in his character development. I've been waiting for you to write another story, so thanks for this gift!
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  • From ANON - Kittynip9 on February 13, 2004
    No, don't stop now! I've read both "Subcumb" and "the End Justifies the Means" a long time ago (on swats) and was snagged. The way you portray the characters and the depth that you go at is just unimagineable. I couldn't stop reading either story and both of your vingettes with them have taken the surface of their relationship to new heights.
    My fiance has read part of "Sucumb" and he thinks that; with your writing, the depth of the story and characters and the seer presence of these stories, they should be given to Lucas with a note saying, "Read These! They're what you're TRYING to do!"
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  • From ANON - Micky on February 03, 2004
    I just finished reading this and I just want to say that your writing is among the best I have ever read, electronic or hard copy. The way you describe the scenes and how they are feeling is exquisite. I really hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - pensfan100 on January 17, 2004
    Awesome, awesome, awesome! You have GOT to be the best writer of adult fan fiction out there! Every award should go to you for your ability to paint such vivid, emotional, stirring pictures! When I read your stories I am transported there, the proverbial fly on the wall. You have such a way with words, you should be writing for a living! As far as writers of Anakin/Padme fan fiction you are by far the absolute cream of the crop! I can't wait for the next part!
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