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Reviews for Yo Ho A Pirate's Life for Me

By : Jack4Turner
  • From AcaciaJules on February 19, 2008
    I loved this story, until the last two chapters, especially the last. Just a few chapters ago, you explained away what Elizabeth did to Will, seemingly having the two make their peace with it. Now suddenly their both all filled with betrayal and rage again. Not to mention your portrayal of Elizabeth is completely OOC. Now, quite possibly, you got as pissed as I did over her actions in the second movie, but that's still no reason to go completely amateur when it comes to your writing.
    Frankly, I'm very disappointed in these actions. You had a wonderful story on your hands. It was hot, erotic, with a cool storyline. Elizabeth and the inhabitants of Port Royal were out of the way, and never needed to be mentioned again. Heck, you even had Will realizing he'd been in love with Jack the whole time, which would have make his confession to Elizabeth false, which means why should he dare be upset that she chose to marry someone else?! What is it, I can't marry her, so no one else can?! How childish. And he's supposedly the grown-up one. Seems more like Elizabeth was the one with a realistic life view.

    You would be better off deleting the last two chapters, and continuing on exploring the rest of the world, like you had said you were going to.
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  • From ANON - Phantom on December 10, 2006
    PLEASE I NEEEEEEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - nekogin on September 19, 2006
    i loooooooooove this story!!!!! is nother chappie comin out i cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Kiru on August 17, 2006
    Just thought you should know 1 league equals 3.45 miles. So if the merchant ship was 600 leagues away, that'd make it 2,070 miles away. There's no way they'd see it. maybe you meant it was 2 leagues (7 miles) away? I don't think the visibility is good for even 6 leagues (124.5 miles). Kinda makes your story a bit discredited. But otherwise it's an ok story. I'm more into a stronger Will, but at least you write with a beta reader.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2006
    dude i love this story it the best jack will ive read you need to yup date
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  • From ANON - Storm on January 22, 2006
    Just found this story. I like it. I hope you continue this. It is ver good.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2006
    Please do continue this fanfiction. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sakura on January 04, 2006
    So deliciously yummy. I love it. So bloody hott. Please continue... with even more sex =] You're writing is amazing. You need to channel this talent into a publishable work... you could get really rich!!!!
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  • From ANON - Yukio on November 04, 2005
    Yo. Gunna update? anyday now...
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  • From ANON - D/H on October 24, 2005
    Love everything but HATE THE RAPE scene..I don't get why there ALWAYS have to be one in these M?M fic???WHy can't author stick with beating and stuff....I think Rape is the worst punishment and even worst then DEATH....I just hate it..

    Anyway, love your story and hopeto see another chapter soon..

    Well, ..As for the 3..I don't know..Have the girl be raped..That or her, i don't care for....That's the worst then and ravenge, i think, that can happen to the two men, her father and husband..


    Your SEX scenes between Jack and Will are magnificent....Damn, that man SURE has alot of ENERGY going on..LOL..Even Will pales in comparsions..LOL...

    Sex in the Ocean..That'll be fun to read..Hahahaha..
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  • From ANON - Drarry23 on June 26, 2005
    I'm really enjoying you'r look on POTC. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Arsinen on June 20, 2005
    Oh wow I loved this. Read it all in one sitting too. ^_^ Can't wait for more please update soon and email me when you do savvy? Here's my email if hyou do decide to email me JDino83@msn.com if you don't i'll use the cat on you svvay. Alright mate see ya's later.
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  • From ANON - GothicAnn87 on June 09, 2005
    Great story. I luv the wonderful yummy shagging slash of Jack/Will.
    * Winks*
    Update again asap please. GO SLASH!
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  • From ANON - Kai on June 02, 2005
    YAY!!!!!! I love when authors have many different situations of fucking!!!
    I only have 3 itsy-bitsy requests
    1)I would really like to see (er, read) Will riding Jack
    2)Will getting to screw Jack
    3)Jack riding Will
    Thass all! Thankies!
    Love ya!
    Kai
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  • From ANON - YEHUDIS on March 30, 2005
    ha i love it first time every reading pirate of the carribean thought they didnt have a jack and will in othrer plCES NEVER LOKKED BUT DAMN THAT WAS GOOD

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