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Reviews for Never Wanted This

By : emmaelf
  • From ANON - Kilcodo on August 26, 2003
    THANK YOU FOR CHAP. 2
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  • From ANON - moondancer on August 26, 2003
    This is the first and only time I've felt inspired enough to review any POTC fanfic, or indeed anything at all on this site, but I HAD to review this one. God. You HAVE to continue. You HAVE to. There'll be lynch mobs at your door if you don't.

    I love the concept, and it is very well written. I can't point out any specifics in this review, as I was lost in the moment when reading it (to me the sign of a really good fic). But, if you ever feel you want a beta reader, or just a second opinion, I'd be more than happy to try to beta your stories. Specifically this one!! It's been a while since I wrote any fanfic myself, but I do have a decent working knowledge of the English language - and a keen interest in slash.

    Can't wait for the next instalment. This is really fab stuff.

    BTW, ve tve to say this, but as soon as I saw the movie, I figured Will as bottom in a BDSM relationship (although probably not in a consensual manner without a lot of persuasion and a lot of time to get used to the idea - he is, after all, Mr Naivity). Thanks a million for playing with this concept. The question now is, does Jack know this person (yes, surely?), and what will happen when Jack and Elizabeth finally do rescue Will? I'm thinking Elizabeth is somehow not going to be enough for Will anymore.

    Jaye
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  • From ANON - Exrated on August 26, 2003
    OMG, this story is fucking great! I love it! You're an unbelievable writer, and I can't *wait* for the next part!

    X
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  • From ANON - Erica on August 26, 2003
    This is so good! Very unique with the spanish invaders. Varga sounds evil, poor Will. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on August 25, 2003
    A very interesting beginning! I think this fic hol lot lot of promise. ^_^ I'm a sucker for character torture fics. ^_^;;; And this is quite the intriguing premise you have set up here, too. I look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Pookie on August 25, 2003
    omg, this is so neat!

    such a sacrifice Will is making to keep his friends and family safe!
    and who doesn't like Will angst?!

    I can't wait for more!

    please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Leeta on August 25, 2003
    More please, and soon!
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  • From ANON - Polly on August 25, 2003
    Well, you certainly have my attention on this story now... and I think you have carved out a pretty cool villian! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Nina on August 25, 2003
    It seems very interesting.
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  • From ANON - lucy on August 25, 2003
    Oooh, very dark, but I like it.
    Poor Will, feeling so responcible for it all, and condamning himself to the life of a slave.
    Please continue
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  • From ANON - Kilcodo on August 24, 2003
    I love it. You illustrate Varga very well, he almost reminds me of a slinky cheshireue aue anime character. I wanna read more!
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  • From ANON - Cait on August 24, 2003
    OMG! This was a great story. I couldn't take my eyes off of it. Don't make Will suffer too much, he is precious.
    Upgrade quickly! Must know what happens to Will. ttyl
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