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Reviews for Never Wanted This

By : emmaelf
  • From ANON - ? on September 09, 2003
    Great story. Please don't be too rough on Will. Please continue

    One thing I noticed (This is not a flame) was that you wrote chapter 6 when I thing it should say chapter 5, might be a good ides to check.
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  • From ANON - Serena on September 09, 2003
    What a wonderfully written story - Varga's just the villain one would love and hate.

    Just a question though, will there be any J/W slash in the upcoming chapters? I'm a sucker for J/W and was hoping to see some in this y...y...

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  • From ANON - Triptych on September 09, 2003
    Very very good. More please.
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  • From ANON - xelliss on September 09, 2003
    Great chapter!!

    but why "chapter six"? is it chapter 5?
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  • From ANON - Becky on September 09, 2003
    Kind to Will? Hah. You write what you want. Hope you update soon. Can't wait to see how it turns. Be.
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  • From ANON - Squall on September 08, 2003
    I rarely feel compelled to review anything but this story has to be the grossest, most deplorable, most painful to read fic that I have ever read. Never before has someone pushed a fictional character to the limits of sexual insanity and wanton. I love it. How you describe the mental abuse of Will is excellent. And Varge is definately someone I would kill if I were Will, Liz or Jack. Keep it coming...ehehe Mind the pun.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on September 08, 2003
    God, I love this fic! I must confess that I really love to see my favourite characters suffer. ^^;;; I hope to see many more updates, but please, don't end the fic too soon! You have a great style and it's a very enjoyable read. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Jack4Turner on September 08, 2003
    OMG

    Poor Will!!!!! Being passed around like that...you ought to be ashamed of yourself. Torturing the boy like that. Passing him around. Shameful!

    And were is Jack? Isn’t the good captain supposed to rescue Will? Hurry and make that happen so the suffering can stop.

    Excellent story so far…you have a fan in me. :) Keep up the excellent writing.

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  • From ANON - Sparx on September 08, 2003
    Whoa...That was...kind of disturbing lol. So Will didn't realize there was something going on? In the back of his mind I would think he would wonder. Those drugs left him.. eep! LOL. Can that be considered non-con? I mean yes he was drugged, but....*shrugs* Can he ever even heal after all this?
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  • From ANON - Spirit3 on September 08, 2003
    I just followed your link from Fanfinction.net, mainly cos i was going crazy with suspiscion! Thnk god you continued, but you know, you *Can*t tht this on fanfiction.net. I've seen a lot worse on there, lemme tell you. Yours is pretty mild in comparison! Plus,

    “Captain, *Captain* Sparrow,”

    I LOVED that bit!!! hehe

    ~~*Spirit*~~
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  • From ANON - Becky on September 07, 2003
    Wow, very exciting! I can't wait to see how this turns out. Update, girl, update!
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  • From ANON - ? on September 06, 2003
    Good story. Please finish soon. Don't be too rough of Will, though. He is the main character
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  • From ANON - Cait on September 06, 2003
    OMG!!! This is the best story. I was horror struck in the 2nd chapter but now I am overjoyed that Jack is coming to save Will. Please don't hurt Will too much in the next chapter. I know its just fantasy but these days I can't look into Orli's eyes and not think of a story like this. UPGRADE SOOOON!!!
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  • From ANON - kari on September 04, 2003
    write more soon! i want them to save Will! i want to know more about varga(the bastard)! don't forget to tell me when you update, or i won't be able to tell you how great your story is!
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  • From ANON - Zoe on September 04, 2003
    Loveing the story sooo much - and though I'm screaming over Will's predicment, this latest chapter was fantastic! I like the bargaining and the compromises, loe Jack and Elizabeth, and you paint a very realistic Commodore. Which is not to say I'm hop hopping over what poor Will is going through, so I'm going to join everyone else in the "Argh! More, more! PLEASE....." refrain. I love it!
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