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Reviews for The Map

By : Boshomengro
  • From ANON - PirateAurora on November 07, 2005
    Thank you for the chapter! It's absolutely gripping and I love what's been happening. Very well written. Want more. More. Please let them get safely off the island and onto the Pearl!
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  • From ANON - meagn on November 07, 2005
    yeah, another chapter, this story just keeps getting better and better! I can't wait till the next chapter to see whats going to happen!!
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  • From ANON - Biokinetic on November 06, 2005
    I took four hours in reading this story thoroughly through and through and I LOVE it. At first I thought the plot was going to be kinda off track and un believable but this story could have really been weaved into the POTC story so this story is just a phenominal accomplishment. I really hope you update soon because I had forgottent o review every chapter whilst I was reading the story but I checked here everyday for a week and there was no change and I wasn't certain if that was because the chapters take a long time to write or because you weren't getting any reviews... So here I am, reviewing.
    I really....really like how you made your OC, its completely believable and absolutely riveting at how you take the story at a pace where it just keeps your attention all the way through even though the chapters are long and detailed. Everything is perfectly constructed and its a crazy thought, but if this was a book you could probably publish it!
    Anyways, keep up the good work please and I hope to see an update from you soon!
    Biokinetic
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  • From ANON - Shad Phenix on November 02, 2005
    I have just spent the last three days reading this story, and I absolutely love it! You have managed to write an adventure that firstly, portrays Jack not as an imbecile, not as an inconsistent drunkard, but as Jack, the lovable sexy but strange pirate who damned-well knows what he's doing. Not only this, you have also created a wonderful original character who I enjoy thoroughly. You have employed so many of your own characters and plots. Plus, the events on the island are very interesting. It's very much "what'll happen next?"

    I like to try to give well-rounded critiques, but right now, I've read so much that I don't believe I can point out specific thngs. Reguardless, thanks very much for providing me with something to help ignore my work. Baited breath till the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - M M on November 01, 2005
    You reveal just enough new info to keep me unsure of the outcome and interested in figuring it out.
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  • From ANON - PirateAurora on November 01, 2005
    Awesome chapter!!! Hopefully I'll be able to let out my breath once they're back on board the Pearl? Poor Nell, she needs some serious lovin'. Beautiful writing, lovely to read. Keep going please!!!!!
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  • From ANON - michele on October 31, 2005
    Thanks so much for a new chapter to come home to and read!! It's GREAT!!! Just please don't let Nell end up with Norington or Bryant!! Absolutely love this story. Please keep up the great work!! SO looking forward to it!!!!
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  • From ANON - beachmlt on October 31, 2005
    Gawd, I love this story...please continue and quickly if you can. :-))
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  • From ANON - kate on October 31, 2005
    yes, its me again!
    thank you so much for the update! this is getting freakier every time :D
    hehe.. and i sense some jealousy from jacks side. serves him right! he needs some competition.
    just to keep him on his toes of course ;D
    i hope they will make it off.
    again: DON'T KILL ANY MORE PEOPLE! i will go nuts if you put more tension into this. the part
    where jack was about to sink into the quicksand i nearly choked on my orange juice.
    hehe
    and i could do with some more jack/nell scenes ;D just for lightning up the angsty mood of course
    KEEP GOING! please update VERY SOON again!

    kate
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  • From ANON - lum on October 30, 2005
    Wonderful new chapter. I like the direction this is going in, please continue full steam ahead. :)
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  • From ANON - Jess on October 25, 2005
    Oh my god, you have to write the next chapter. AND SOON!, this story is brilliantly planned, the plot is thick, I swear to god Im going to have night mares about that guy climbing up the side of the water fall. *Shivers at thought* its just like the Ring 2..... Keep up the great work, you rock!
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  • From ANON - megan on October 24, 2005
    yah another chapter!! Finally Nell told Jack how she feels, I wonder how he will respond?? Anyways keep up the wonderful work, and hopefully you'll update this story soon...I'm so addicted to it!!
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  • From ANON - lili on October 24, 2005
    yay for PDA!
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  • From ANON - M M on October 24, 2005
    No cold feet! Keep on going. i think it is really good anyway, and I eagerly await your next update.
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  • From ANON - kara on October 24, 2005
    i really hope you don't plan on killing anyone important off or making it take a sour turn because i think it would really destroy people's love for the story and you would lose your followers. i think they should get back to the pearl, make hot passionate love, and then continue on into another new and exciting characters that we can fall in love with. the story should not end, ever. they should just keep having new adventures because the way you write is too good to give up.

    more soon please!
    kara
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