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By : Boshomengro
  • From ANON - istalindar on November 01, 2003
    its absolutely brilliant! i love it. the errors keep coming up on some stories i've done as well, i have no idea why. they arent too bad on your though, i barely noticed them. please update REALLY soon! istalindar
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  • From ANON - GylzGirl on October 30, 2003
    I was tryin' not to be pushy because I knew you were moving soon, but YEA! I'm so glad we got last minute goodies before you did. Please do hurry with more :) For that was a very much cliffhanger. But... you've also set us up for Jack rescue later so I'm prepared to forgive just about anything. I am a SUCKER for a good rescue, especially ones starring our handsome Captain! I'm quite excited for the next part now... but, wh, when aren't I :)

    Hope everything goes smooth with your house move dearie. And as always, MORE MORE MORE :
    Tri
    Tricia
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  • From ANON - Cami on October 05, 2003
    Once again, absolutely wonderantabulous!

    Your updates never fail to cheer me up :)

    Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Sue on October 05, 2003
    Wonderful story! Jack's in character, which is not an easy thing to do, I think. I'd hate to try and write him myself. Loving Denial!Jack, 'though I hope Nell sets him back on his smug ass soon. On the subject of Nell ... I normally avoid stories with an original character as a central part of the story, especially a female one - the dreaded Mary Sue. But I like Nell. She is a well developed, believable character and the relationship between her and Jack is coming along in a natural fashion (and is fun besides!) I hope your move goes smoothly (my sympathies, I hate moving house!) Keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - gylzgirl on October 04, 2003
    Aww, Jack was kind of a meanie butt in that one. It'll serve him right if next time Nell makes him wait...oh...minutes before letting him have his way :)

    Keep 'em comin'
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  • From ANON - Andy on October 02, 2003
    first off...your very good. *nods* very good. Not many would be able to pull off writing jack as well as you do. It's almost like rexprising jonny deep do the char. I just wish you would write more. >.< I know you will...I just want it now. *sniffles* Did I tell you that you e goe good?
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  • From ANON - Serendipity on September 28, 2003
    Your story s great, and I hope U keep writing, and don't worry 'bout the dribble since it just increases the suspense. So yay! and UPDATE (or else...*twitch* *twitch*)
    Could you send me an e-mail when U update?
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  • From ANON - so great on September 27, 2003
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  • From ANON - morning glory on September 27, 2003
    this story is seriously one of the best stories i have ever written. i started reading it back in august, but totally lost track of it and forgot about it when school started. last night, i randomly stumbled upon it and i couldn't stop reading. it's brilliant, it really is. now i see that you last updated on 9/25, but seeing that i'm new to this and what not, how bout we get another chapter before the end of the weekend? ;-) pretty please? with jack sparrow on top?

    speaking of jack sparrow, you're characterization is dead-on. i love how incredibly creative and original this story is. YAY! me want more.
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  • From ANON - whyisthissogood? on September 27, 2003
    this story is amazing. you're an amazing writer. you must update asap.
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  • From ANON - Dixie on September 26, 2003
    I'm enjoying your writing, whole-heartedly! With nothing but subtle editorial issues sprinkled here and there, you have an excellent work and a very entertaining tale.

    I adore your Jack interpretation. I think it's dead-on center, and the fact that you can make a less-than-perfect, better-than-demonic compromise of an original character says to me that you have great talent. I hope yoso wso write outside of fanfiction. I would squeal to get to see any original thing you may have/will have written!

    (psst. If you'd like some extra help with the typos, I'd be more than pleased to beta [read: get in on the story before anyone else can, MWAH. HA. HA] for you!)
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  • From ANON - gylzgirl on September 25, 2003
    Snakes alive girl! What a place to leave it! :-) I'm holding you to that faster typing thing Awesome as always.


    Waiting patiently...NOT! MORE MORE MORE!

    Tricia
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  • From ANON - penny lane on September 14, 2003
    I'm really enjoying the story. It's well written, intelligent and enthralling. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - gylzgirl on September 12, 2003
    Wow! You're just gonna have to learn to write faster :-) This is really great. Good details. Very fleshed out. And so very Jack
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  • From ANON - Jessie Seagull on September 11, 2003
    I like stories that focus on the adventured of Jack, they seem more plausible; in other words, I love it. Although, I sort of pictured Jack as owning more than five shirts...
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