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Reviews for After the Boys of Summer Have Gone

By : Clong
  • From ANON - KjR on August 02, 2006
    Absolutely stunning!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2004
    The first second-person fic I've been able to get two paragraphs into--consider yourself praised! The character development is good, the lovemaking hot, the dialog mostly fitting. The woman's revelation is a bit over the top, but only in terms of pacing. A more gradual demonization of her evil spouse, even if there _isn't_ really room for it in the length of the story, would have been more plausible. And just as scary.
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  • From ANON - jillij ( too lazy to sign in ) on December 21, 2004
    I loved this story and its concept. For a moment there you had me wondering if you'd actually have him come back or not. I do like what you decided to do but I would have been satisfied if he'd not come back. It was lovely.

    ta
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  • From ANON - PiratesWench on March 02, 2004
    I loved this story so much! I cried and not many stories can make me do that. I would love to see more about this pairing! Wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - Arella on October 08, 2003
    Loved it so much!

    Especially the perspective is quite daring and it works out really well.
    I like the way you write about Jack, him being tender and loving, yet he never stops being a pirate captain, someone who is used to killing and stealing if necessairy, someone who has a responsibility for his crew, no matter which personal sacrifices he has to make.

    Thanks for a splendid read!

    Arella.
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  • From ANON - elanor on October 03, 2003
    Your story rocked my world. You deserve a medal. Write some more stories, will you?
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  • From ANON - me on September 23, 2003
    That was wonderful. I would never expect something like that from AFF.net. Go you. And one never runs across 2nd PoV very often. Clever. That was just great...It left me with a smile on my face. Please, write more. Write a sequel...write SOMETHING!!!! Bye.
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  • From ANON - Iséng on September 19, 2003
    You HAVE to do a sequel! Please, please, plllllleeeeeaaaaaassssssse! *begs lovely author shamlessly*^_^
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  • From ANON - CQ on August 31, 2003
    Your story drew me in because I've always loved the Don Henley song with this same title. Was there something about that lyric that inspired you to write this story? You have a great command of plot, character, and action that moved along terrifically. You were true to the character of Jack shown in the movie. What is it about Jack that haunts me so? I've read your story several times and will keep re-reading it. I hope to see more of your work here. Thanks for your effort!
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  • From ANON - AnneBonny on August 23, 2003
    This has been certainly one of the most erotic encounters I ever had with the written . My. My heartfelt thanks for this wonderful experience. I shall watch out closely for your name on the wide open sea of fanbased literature and hope to encounter it again.

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  • From ANON - w on August 21, 2003
    This is absolutely FABULOUS.
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  • From ANON - allie_bug on August 21, 2003
    Awwwww this was the bestest POTC fic i have read in a very long time. I like sex with a plot and thats exactly what it is. lol but keep up the good work!! This was great!
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  • From ANON - jen on August 19, 2003
    This was a truly fantastic story. I read it this morning, actually, with my coffee while getting ready for work. Ended up getting to the office about ten minutes late because I didn't want to stop reading. You did some great stuff with this story: not only was it hot as hell and very moving besides, the writing style was phenomenal. It's damned hard to write in second person, and you pulled it off amazingly well. I very much enjoyed reading it, even if I did have to take a short lunch today!
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  • From ANON - giova on August 19, 2003
    All finished now and what can I say? This was just wonderfull, I really enjoyed it. Oh, I can think of one thing to say at least: Sequal? Please?
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  • From ANON - giova on August 19, 2003
    This is brilliantly written, Jack is totally in character and the descriptions are beautifull. It is also very clever how you have written it, in the present tence without naming or describing the woman overly much- any reader could insert herself into the story. Very nice! I'm on part two and can't wait to read the rest!
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