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Reviews for Breathe

By : elfchic02
  • From ANON - YamiSeirei on July 17, 2006
    I really like this fic, i kinda wondered myself what would have happened if Will hadn't got off the boat before it exploaded please write more and can i have a JS clone? thanks!! hehe
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  • From ANON - tara on December 31, 2005
    dont leave it at that what the hell keep going come on please

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  • From ANON - moona on January 17, 2004
    Can I have more than one clone? Maybe two? Jack and Will clones would be greatly appreciated. Not that I'm greedy or anything. Well maybe I am. So what of it. Excellent story. The sea turtle bit, very funny. Please please update soon, absolutly must know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Mary Jane on January 03, 2004
    Well I'm sucked in... hope you write more soon
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  • From ANON - alanna on January 01, 2004
    I am enjoying your ficcie alot...*stares at front door for several minutes*... it's really quite good...*goes to look out window*... you've certainly got a talent for cliffhangers...*paces around apartment for several IMPATIENT minutes*... sure hope you'll update soon...*opens front door and stands out in the cold for a while*... you're quite a talented writer...*looks out window again then glares at computer*....WHERE THE F%#K IS MY ORLANDO BLOOM CLONE !!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jo on December 22, 2003
    Great work so far!!! Please continue. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From inuyashasgirl on December 22, 2003
    This is a great story so far. Keep it up! I look forward to the next update. If you have the time check out my pirates of the caribbean fic, it's called Kidnapped. Anyway, great job!
    Inusgirl
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  • From ANON - Ibonekoen on December 18, 2003
    Oy, poor Will. Interesting take on the movie. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
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  • From ANON - Captain Jill on December 16, 2003
    SEA TURTLES!!! LMAO!!!!!! (what mental problem?)

    Captain Jill Loon of the Green Pea!
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  • From ANON - Cait on December 13, 2003
    LMAO! Sea turtles? That's hilarious. I almost gave up on you but I knew a story as good as this could never be abandoned. Update soon. I wanna see what happens with them turtles. Savi
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  • From Bria on December 13, 2003
    Pretty good story. Interesting concept, most definitely.
    I have one little nitpicky thing to point out, though -- the water in the Caribbean isn't cold.
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  • From ANON - Jack4Turner on December 12, 2003
    Really I want a Johnny Clone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    Alright well onto the review, just needed to tell you that I love this story...I have it in my favorites and everything on FF.net. I was wondering if you had abondoned it. Praying that you hadn't. It's so good to see another chapter!!!! :) Just love the sea turtle bit. That is so cute! "Take the boy." poor Will! What a way to go drowned and then feed to a sea monster. Jack wouldnt really do that now would he? Though I guess he is a pirate :) Please Please Please update more soon! Savvy?


    And don't forget I want a Johnny Depp Clone!!!! you promised :)
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  • From ANON - Angel on September 21, 2003
    Actually, when you think about it, in order for Jack to live, Will could die. In order for Will to live, Jack must live, so one must not die after all. *raises brow* A bit befuddled, but I think it gets across my meaning. If one dies, namely Jack 'cause Will's already dead and not yet revived, then both go. There's no other way, really. *grins*

    Nope, it's not a flame, it's me talking myself out of getting tense about you killing off dear Captain Sparrow. I love Will and all, and they make one hell of a couple, but... Sheesh. No killing of the Jack! *w*

    Not bad so far. Seems to be more A/N's than fic in that last chapter, but those are interesting too. Y'know, too, that an interesting thought occured to me. First watching the movie, and again reading this fic. If they blew up the one who is in actual living possesion of Bootstrap Bill's blood, then... The curse can never be lifted, can it? One good way to make the entire Barbosa crew go off thckercker would be to *tell* them why Elizabeth's blood didn't work out. Questioning Jack isn't going to do them much good, if Will's 'at the bottom of Davy Jones' locker'.

    Interesting to see where you take this, if you take it further.
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  • From ANON - Alkvingiel on September 13, 2003
    Dude!!! Would u please hurry & update?!?!? PLEASE!!! If this was real Will would really be dead! Then u would have some very pissed off people 2 deal with! I am dying 2 know what happens! Why did u have 2 leave us with such a monstorus cliffie?!?!
    UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From on August 18, 2003
    "To my silent lurkers: review! I really wanna hear your thoughts on this!!!! :-P" ...Fine... :P"
    My two cents worth: you are evil! Your cliffhanger endings are just cruel, but they are very entertaining none-the-less. ;) I'm not a writer, so I have no idea how to judge plot, characters, dialog, etc. - I can just tell you that I'm enjg thg the story and I'm looking forward to more postings from ya. Savvy? :)
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