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Reviews for Breathe

By : elfchic02
  • From ANON - Erica on August 11, 2003
    This is great...but don't let anng tng too bad happen to Will...please? I reviewed...
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  • From ANON - angelbird on August 10, 2003
    good start to what looks like a great story. please continue soon.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on August 10, 2003
    Empty threat chicky! (I hope!) As there's little to be shrapnel on the Interceptor and though gunpower makes a big boom and fire, there's nothing there to pierce the. E. E. Excellent start, hope to see more of this quickly!
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  • From ANON - Raven on August 10, 2003
    Ooh! Very thrilling! Impressed that most lines are word for word, and I am curious as to what is going to happen to Will.........I may sound a bit sadistic but......You can hurt him as much as you want......but please, no missing limbs or anything that drastic. *snicker* Good, though...so keep going.
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  • From ANON - Karasu on August 10, 2003
    You're doing well so far and I'm interested to see where you're heading with this to change the movie's course. I would like to point out somng tng that bothers me a lot while reading - you're changing tenses. ;;^^ Please look over you next chapters to make sure everything's in past tense? It's very distracting having the verbs suddenly become present tense.
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  • From ANON - ShinigamiGirl on August 10, 2003
    Will better not drown! Hurry up and update! Can't wait till you do!
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  • From ANON - Cait on August 10, 2003
    I was goin tel tell you what a great story you wrote until I read that last comment. I love Will Turner and I will hate and loathe you forever if you do any harm to him! That is just my "obsession over orlando bloom talk" but really dont hurt him.lol Anyhoo upgrade soon, I really want to know what happens.
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  • From ANON - Melanie on August 10, 2003
    This story is very interesting. I like it alot. :) Will Barbossa get to Will? I am anxious to find out what will happen to the lad. ;) Do keep going... can't wait to read more of this tale. Thanks for sharing!
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