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Reviews for Give Nothing Back

By : minikitkatgirl
  • From ANON - Mahie on September 01, 2004
    Perfect! Please continue soon. I can't wait to see them deepening their relationship. ;)
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  • From ANON - Sarryn on January 05, 2004
    Deliciously wicked. Your Jack is sin on legs! Exquisite.
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  • From ANON - Alkvingiel on August 19, 2003
    Ohhhh! I'm loving it! Please continue soon! What if Jack woke up the next morning...early morning before anyone else was up to find Will sitting looking out the window but not really seeing what he was looking at. When he finally gets his attention the first thing he sees surprises him. Fear, questions, a inner struggle...but they are all suddenly replaced by what he now sees is a false cheer. When he asks what's wrong Will won't answer him.
    I dunno that's just what popped into my mind when I read this 2nd chapter. Ok Ja Ne!
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  • From ViragoLuna on August 18, 2003
    ... Please tell me that there is more... There HAS to be more! Great story!! ~O>
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  • From on August 17, 2003
    Um....I can't think of anything witty to say. Good story, very well written. You've got the personalities down pretty well.
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  • From ANON - red on August 17, 2003
    this is good! I'm awaiting for the continuation! your da' bomb!
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  • From ANON - Midnight Parade on August 17, 2003
    This had to have been one of the best. fics. i've. ever. read. ever. period. :D i don't remember the last time i drooled this much... amazing. i love the end of the second chapter. beautiful. :D MORE!
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  • From ANON - MsWagner4lyfe on July 29, 2003
    lol that was a very good story, but unfortunetly you kinda left me hanging i want more, savvy? lol keep writing!!!
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  • From ANON - Earen on July 29, 2003
    HEY! Don't stop there! WE need true debauchery, depravity, lots of sodomy! Come on! WOOHOO! Great start.

    Earen
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  • From ANON - julee on July 28, 2003
    MOOOOOOOOOORE MORE MORE MORE MORE *dies*
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  • From ANON - Lissa on July 28, 2003
    It ends there? ... How can you do that to me?!
    *thinks things over* However, I suppose if you continued it might ruin everything. That happens quite often.
    I loved (LOVED! I tell you!) the way you portrayed Jack. Doing something underhanded like that just matches his personality perfectly. I would think Jack is a hard character to write, so congrats! If my muse hadn't run away *sniffs* I would have shared him with you.
    (!! My computer just scared me really bad...It made a really loud noise just 'cause I pressed the shift key 5 times...or something. I just about tipped my chair over.)
    Will's portrayal (sp?) was purdy smooth too! ^.~ I can picture him being 'lost in thought' so easily...
    There are a few gramatical mistakes in there, but I'm too lazy to go back to find 'em.
    All in all, you gots yerself a spiffy piece of slashy fanfiction! Good luck to ya with future works.
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  • From ANON - Pookie on July 28, 2003
    wow... this is really good!

    I wasn't sure what to make of it, cuz the summary didn't make much sense to my little brain, but it's Will/Jack slash and I have an addiction so.. here I am!

    it's really funny that Jack could climb on Will's back (at least that's how I read it) and Will didn't notice...

    I love how you ended it with "That's interesting"

    can't wait for more! soon! please!
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  • From ANON - GundamNymph on July 27, 2003
    THERE BETTER BE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!
    *growls at author*

    It's a great story so far. LOVED the part where Jack finds out Will is NOT eunuch. ^___^ And as the Captain circled Will like a vulture, you had me drooling over my keyboard. PLENTLY of UST! hee, hee. I always loved FieryButClueless!Will and AdvancingAndSexy!Jack. Hoping to see more from you soon!

    ^_~GN
    *who REALLY needs to get ch10 out on her own J/W*
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  • From ANON - Jane Silver on July 27, 2003
    A bit complicated wording in the begining, but I'm sure once you write more it will be better.
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