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By : JediWalflower
  • From ANON - BLACK*PLAGUE on August 01, 2003
    Hey, that was only minimal groping of Turner there. Well at least there was a little. Good stuff , keep it up.
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  • From ANON - BLACK*PLAGUE on August 01, 2003
    Hey, that was only minimal groping of Turner there. Well at least there was a little. Good stuff , keep it up.
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  • From desertwren on August 01, 2003
    Oh that was breath taking.. and heart breaking.. and all those other things that explain why i am short of breath right now!! Jack finally got his sword!! And his reaction.. and Wills reaction.. and andand.. ahhhhhh.. lossing cohey.. y.. .. desending into babble mode.. love rea really very well done.. mmm lovely way to leave us though.. now we all have drooly wet sticky thoughts going through our minds.. sweet! Can't wait for them to really *cough* talk!! as always.. more soon please.. Wren
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  • From ANON - Renee on August 01, 2003
    Miss Greenleaf...
    O wow... that was such a beautiful kiss. The sexual tension and anticipation were built perfectly, and I smiled giddily when our boys lips met for the first time... Without a word, I could sense the blood flow south in their bodies... allowing for furhter, ahem, tension.
    Wonderfully written...
    Eagerly anticipating the sex scene... but it's so built up!! the pressure! the pressure! Can you handle it?
    haha,
    Renee
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  • From ANON - Jadefire on August 01, 2003
    This story is really good. I look forward to your updates. Keep up the great work! :)
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  • From ANON - Telhuinewen on August 01, 2003
    Cheers to a new piece of the story! Mmm, rum would do well, I do suppose.

    I have been enjoying the read thus far and am sure I will enjoy the read unto the end. The cliff-hanger was well worth it to be rewarded with Chapter 5, very much so. As always, superb and dead-on characterization, as well as brilliant writing.

    Can't wait to read the next chapter.

    -T
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  • From ANON - Mel on August 01, 2003
    I came here to review earlier then got dictedcted ^_^' Anyhow...

    Ooh, do we get Jack/Will smut?? lol. I just love that word, smut. ^_^' Very nicely written! I liked how you got Jack to Tortuga without him just having impeccable timing, very believable.

    It's always a pleasure reading your work, I just love it! Canait ait for the next installment!

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - ShadowSpirit on August 01, 2003
    BY FAR this has been the best chapter yet! I loved it, the length of it, how it flowed. My favorite scene was probably when Will left the ship and Jack followed him and then through to when Jack is speechless. The kiss was very well done ^^ And then Will had a line saying he'd rather die at Jack's side.....liked that too. I'll be waiting for the next chapter ^^
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  • From ANON - Datiye on August 01, 2003
    Hey! How could you be so mean and cut it off at the good part. I better see more of this in the next chapter. Oh, and you are totally correct about where the best swords come from. I have personally used swords from Toledo, Spain, Milan, and Italy ( I was trained in fencing ). My personal favorites are from Italy and Spain. Esecially Italy. Good good swords. Well, congrats on your correctness ( don't know if thats a word ). I like to see well read authors. I will be waiting for your next update. Good Luck!
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  • From ANON - RavensHaelo on August 01, 2003
    This is coming along just great!
    We get to see Jack, Will and Jack get together...
    All we need now is action. And I don't mean t"fla"flashy-explosions-and-gun-fire" kind. Savvy? ;)
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  • From ANON - Jen on July 31, 2003
    I'm new to POTC fanfics, and J/W in general (but coming from an H/D fangirl's POV...I'll be thoroughly immensed in J/W soon...;P) anyway, VERY VERY VERY IC characters! I've read a couple that put Jack thoroughly out of character, but yours is wonderful! AWESOME job!

    Hehe...as i like it, slow and steady, no NC-17 smut quite yet ^^...

    Savvy!

    ~Jen
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  • From ANON - GypsyJ on July 31, 2003
    ContinuecontinuecontinuecontinueCONTINUUUUUE!!!!! Nownownownownooowwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11!1!1!!! I'm hyyyypeeeeerrrr and this story is so gooooood!

    Ahem. Yeah. You're a great writer, and i could tell by the terms you use the footnotes that you do research, a habit all good writers are sure to take up. :D
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  • From ANON - Sanomi on July 31, 2003
    Kya! I'm going to have to draw chibi Jack and Will now. ;P And we're finally getting close to the pirate smut! Will it bein the next chapter? please say yes. pleeeeeeaaaasse.....
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  • From ANON - Jadefire on July 31, 2003
    Hey, keep up the good work, I want to read more ~_~
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  • From ANON - Sandrine Black on July 31, 2003
    YAY! New chapter! I just love how long your chapters are *sigh* just love it I tell you. And I'm so glad that Jack and Will are together now. Wait, I'm pretty much glad about every freakin' thing that happend in this chapter. ^_^ You know that end author note about the jack/will leash thing? Well thanks to that sentence, I snorted out of laughter... and then started cough Tha Thanks a lot! ^_^ hehehe. Definitely looking forward to more of this awesome fieep eep up the FANTASTIC work!!!!
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