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Reviews for Barbossa's boys

By : CandyMoore
  • From ANON - FrankieInAHat on July 23, 2003
    I loved it. You stayed true most of the time to the characters (although I'm guessin you had to imagine a bit with it, since disney would NEVER let something this interesting happen to their characters *sigh*) You said you're done. To which I say @.@. I hope you don't mean the story! There's too much potential! *drools at Possesive!Jack* What's amazing is this has got to be the only non-con I've read that's been well-written! Good job! *huggles*
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  • From ANON - Katrina on July 23, 2003
    Wow, this is really good.
    Yes, I have a suggestion. Tie Will to the mast all night, just once. that would be fun.
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  • From ANON - Myk on July 23, 2003
    Sorry, I was too lazy to log iI wrI wras was well, but it is HP. I've been thinking of taking up Pirates of the Caribbean though, add a little change, a little spice.

    Ahem, that is so not the point to this review. *winks* I know, I know, I'm a sick individual, but that was nice. Not the whole rape thingy...(not that I minded reading it. *blush*), but Jack being all protective of Will. Good show, good show! I hope to read more.

    On a lighter note, I'm from...*conspiratorial whisper*...OHIO! Scarey, huh? Anywho, great job. Keep going.

    Myk
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  • From ANON - Caytin on July 23, 2003
    Nicely done. I wish to see more of this one soon. ^_~
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  • From ANON - Datiye on July 23, 2003
    You have to continue this. It's so good. And I would definatly like to see what would happen with Jack in the bed and Will in the chair. And then meybe Jack and Will on the bed with Barbossa watching from the chair... Hmm.. That could be an interesting idea. = )
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  • From ANON - Viviana on July 23, 2003
    I liked what i read so far. I'm glad someone wrote a story about Barbossa. He was my favorite character. Please write more. A lot more. lol :-D
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  • From ANON - Kari on July 22, 2003
    two words... WRITE MORE!
    That was so cool, you so need more...!
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  • From ANON - kiko-rama on July 22, 2003
    OMG! This is the BEST fic!!!!! Need more NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! Write a longer chapter NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! O_o
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  • From ANON - Raz Gaiale on July 22, 2003
    Another excellent chapter. :) I could FEEL the angst and tension. My one teensy qualm was the lack of development for Will. But it's only two chapters in, and circumstances are a bit extreme, so it's not a real problem at all. :)
    I'd be very interested to see how you'd fit Norrington into the mix. I'm sure you'll manage something great. Go for it! :)
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 22, 2003
    Wow, the first PotC dark fic I've read!! And *very* awesome, by the way. You definately have Barbossa's character! ^_^

    Wow, I'm impressed beyond words really...

    Ooh... Tossing poor Norrington into a fic like this? Well... that could prove interesting! ^_^V

    Woo, love this story. Definately keep with the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - Lynn on July 22, 2003
    *Squee* I mea. Ba. Barbossa's explanation to will was too good. I literally had to stop and read it aloud to my sister it was so good. Suck until you ge the the cream... oy, you are a genius, albeit an evil one.

    As for adding Norrington, if you can do it, I wanna see it, that's for sure! Your imagery was once again amazing. I mean, really, we are all in this for the pretty boys. You describe them so well. Well, except Barbossa, who isn't pretty, but his personality more than covers for it.

    I'd like to see some of Jack's and Will's thoughts. They've got to be interesting. *wonders at them* Hmmm.


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  • From ANON - Veritas on July 22, 2003
    HOT HOT HOT!! I LOVED this. (Is it hot in here or is it just me?)
    Quite frankly I never would've imagined a fic with Barbossa to be, well, YUMMY, but it was! Well done! Perhaps a bit more of Jack would have been nice, but that's merely because I'm more partial to him. ^_^
    Honestly though, this fic was great. Yeah, ok, so I have a thing for non-con. *shrugs* That's why I loved the fic!
    Are you planning on writing any more chapters? I'd love some more!
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  • From ANON - Pookie on July 22, 2003
    YAY! You posted more!!

    I'm not in Ohio, in Illinois though, is that close enough?

    I don't know what all you should add, but maybe a flashback to explain all this? I know, I'm weird, I like to know how they get to this point.

    is the crew still damned or was the curse lifted?

    and Barbossa's apple fetish is kinda creepy...
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  • From ANON - silver fox on July 22, 2003
    hehehe... this was interesting to say the least. i enjoyed it and i most certainly hope you continue writing and updating your works.

    merci beaucoup pour les histoirs amusants et vifs!!
    silver fox

    ;)


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  • From ANON - Melanie on July 21, 2003
    I like it, I really do. But I have one problem....

    The pirates are cursed... they can't enjoy the pleasures of orgasms or or or food or even the touch of human flesh. Is it just that Barbossa is pretending that he feels it and such? I dunno... *shrugs* But other than that lil' mistake, it's a good story. Do keep going... I will continue to read it. :)
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